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Writing
and
Research
Midterm
Reflection
and
Evaluation
October
18,
2010
FEEDBACK
Throughout
the
duration
of
the
semester
I
have
not
been
overwhelmed
with
discovering the larger, over‐arching concept behind my thesis prototyping. I believe
this has allowed me the freedom to create in a way that has been fruitful and
seamless. This process has left me with a wide range of prototypes that I was able to
present during our midterm thesis presentations. It was important for me to get an
outsider’s prospective on the work and my process, and overall the feedback was
extremely positive.
Both, Parsons faculty member, Scott Pobiner and, MFA design and technology
candidate, Ryan Raffa, were excited by the diversity within my prototypes. They
were glad to see me exploring a variety of mediums, which Scott said I seemed to be
“in control of”. I thought about this particular comment in depth over the past week.
I do feel very much in control over this project, and the research and
experimentation involved in developing a solid thesis. It was gratifying to know that
professionals in the field acknowledge and identify the work that I am doing.
During the critique I was presented with some wonderful feedback and
suggestions. Scott and Ryan both agreed that I need a more developed “back‐bone”
incorporated into my thesis. While the idea of memory it budding, it needs to be
more deeply rooted in precedence and research. However, in regards to the
precedents
that
I
did
talk
about,
it
was
noted
that
I
had
built
and
reflected
on
their
ideas,
rather
than
emulating
the
work.
It
was
suggested
that
I
look
into
the
concept
of “technological singularity”, which Wikipedia describes as “reflects the idea that
the change may happen suddenly, and that it is very difficult to predict how such a
new world would operate.”1 Other suggestions were to read Einstein’s Dreams by
Alan Lightman, The Information Bomb by Paul Virillo, and (No)Memory by 7
Publishers.
In addition, Scott offered an insightful thing to consider when developing my
thesis further. He suggested that to think about technology that we use to
remember, versus technology that we use to forget. I feel that this idea is rich with
possibilities, and could be a wonderful through line for the work that I am creating.
Some other significant pieces of feedback were regarding the validity of
“fine art” as thesis. While the work that I presented was thought of as well
developed and on a strong track, the questions of “So what?” and “Who cares?” arise.
The work needs to be more than something just nice and beautiful. I agree that it is
important to make my work accessible and to allow for my audience to identify with
certain elements of the work, but I cannot loose my point of view in that process. I
believe that the deeper and more personal the work becomes, the more people will
“care”.
One‐on‐one meetings followed the midterm critiques with my professors
Chris Prentice and Cynthia Lawson. In my meeting with Chris, we discussed the
similarities
in
the
process
of
choreographing
dance
and
prototyping.
As
an
exercise,
1
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Technological_singularity
she
recommended
that
I
develop
a
piece
of
writing
that
explores
the
relationship
between these two practices. How does my experience working as a
director/choreographer influence my design practice? At the beginning of the
semester it was suggested that I consider how I could “choreograph” technology. I
have been considering this question with all of my work thus far this semester, and
am in the process of synthesizing what this means. Choreographer and researcher
Ralph Lemon was recommended as a precedent based on his process. I was
encouraged to look into his methodology and the ways he incorporates cross‐
disciplinary exploration.
Chris also talked to me about an advance in the study of Alzheimer’s disease.
They are in the process of developing treatment that is able to reverse the effects
and recover people’s memory. This could be an interesting scientific model to study
and research as I continue to develop my thesis. It also got us talking about
developing work that explores how we can piece memories back together. Currently
my work has been looking at degradation, so this will be a wonderful way to
approach my questions from a different angle. On the topic of questions, Chris told
me that my overall thesis question needs some serious work, while my subsequent
design questions were pretty good. I’m sure as the semester continues, I will be able
to refine and solidify my overall thesis question.
Another domain that Chris suggested I look into is Glitch art. Glitch art is a
genre of fine art that celebrates the glitches and malfunctions of technology. While
most
of
this
glitch
art
is
manufactured,
meaning
the
artists
creates
formulas
and
programs
to
distort
their
images,
there
are
quite
a
number
of
technological
malfunctions that occur. I have already started to research this domain and it has
led me to the investigation of many subsets, including data bending.
Cynthia also offered some insightful feedback. Most important was her
comment that although the work is exciting there is something relatively shallow
about it, she isn’t left with lingering thoughts about it. Perhaps this is because most
of these prototypes were developed as quick sketches, which took no longer than a
few hours to develop. She suggested that I work on a piece that takes a much longer
time to develop. This investment of both time and energy, has the potential to allow
me to create something much more deep and meaningful. This could perhaps help
me answer the “So what?” and “Who cares?” question that Scott raised during my
critique.
NEXT STEPS
To begin with, I have two different prototype ideas that will lend themselves
to Cynthia’s suggestion to take more time in developing my next prototypes. Based
as homage to Jim Campbell’s Home Movie Series2, I want to create a series of
memory light boxes. I initially see them as little keepsake boxes with a lid on them.
When opened, one could peer inside and view clips from my home videos. This idea
is in its initial stages of development, and I feel like I am going to need a lot of time
to sketch and prototype several different iterations of this concept.
2
http://www.jimcampbell.tv/portfolio/low_resolution_works/home_movies/
Stemming
from
Silhouetting
the
Past,
I
am
interested
in
developing
a
body
of
work that incorporates performance and time based media. I know that questions
were raised regarding the notion of performance in the work that I showed during
my presentation. Was the video a video of a performance, or was the video the
performance itself? These questions really excite me. For my next iteration, I am
going to look at the subject of portraits. I will most likely still use home videos as my
“material”, and want to create a series of family portraits based off of my pre‐
existing footage.
In addition to developing these two more in depth prototypes, I think it is
important to test my current works with an audience outside of our studio class. I
am finding this particular step of the design process challenging. For my iChat piece,
I am planning on putting it up in several different “public” spaces, just to see how
people tend to interact with it. The easiest and most obvious place for me to test this
will be some place in the Parsons building. Although I think it is important for me to
test it in a more public arena. Some ideas I have had are placing it on the ground in
the middle of Union Square and taping it to the walls where posters are wheat
pasted.
Methods to test my other prototypes are more ambiguous. Cynthia told me
that I need to think about how I visualize my final work, in order to best decide how
to “test” work that is considered fine art. Do I see it in a gallery? Does it belong in
public space? Is it meant to be viewed on‐line? These are all things I need to
consider,
quickly.
These
questions
will
inform
how
I
decide
to
test
the
work.
I
am
meeting
with
Anthony
Aziz,
a
professor
in
the
Fine
Art
department
at
Parsons, this week and hopefully he will provide me with another perspective on my
work. I think it is important to get feedback from someone who is removed from the
Design and Technology department, especially when my work is situating itself in a
fine art domain. After my meeting with him, I expect to have more clarity about
where I would like to position my work, and next steps in testing it with its
proposed audience.
In terms of research, I am in the process of familiarizing myself with
autobiographical memory from a scientific perspective. I believe that having a
strong foundation and understanding of memory and forgetting from this point of
view will help ground my work. In addition, I am reading the literature that was
suggested during my critiques as well as researching other fine artists and
performance artists that have explored similar themes in their work.