Cyril Jane c.

Acut

Al Duane B. Ungab, RN, MAN

In Pheno or quali your intro is not substantial because you are waiting for your result and
discussion.

It should be full-blown.

You don’t have a general theme.

You should have a statement if you have a verbatim.

You should have a discussion and it should be supported by your RRL.

In the pheno, you should be creative with your words.

In your perspective, use your own perspective.

Mae Dayanne M. Soliven, RN, MSN, CRN

Out of your 4 identified themes you should have 1 main theme.

You have to include saturation.

The experiences should not come from the researcher experiences, it should be from the
respondents.

“debriefing’’

Theresa Linda C. Narreto- Painagan, RN, MSN

‘’counselling” ‘’denial/honesty’’ are not considered as sub-theme.

Change the sub theme.

It should say something that there are challenges.

Use appropriate word.

Financial sacrifices and self-spending is one. You really have to be creative in your word
forming to captivate the readers.
Your ideas should be free flowing.

The essence of your code names..what is the reason, explain..

When you present, do not use funny words(although its okay) use words with impact or with a
relationship on their characteristics.

Your result needs improvement.

Improve theming.

Extract more creative words on how you put your themes.

Consider your codenames,

Your perspective, not other perspective.

Add discussion to your findings get the main point on your RRL.

I want to see improvement.