Name of Corrections/Suggestions
Panel
Mr. Statement of the Problem
Supremo - Reflect Statement of the
problem to the
conceptual framework
- Put “Participants” first
Conceptual Framework
- Rearrange Conceptual
Framework
Definition of Terms
- Improve Operational
Definition
Mr. Title Page
Oducado
- Change “Parenting
Competence and Sense
of Satisfaction of
Visually Impaired
persons in Iloilo City”
RRL
- Too lengthy
Definition of Terms
- Change “Competence”
to “Parenting
Competence”
- Alphabetical Order
Actions Done Page number
pp. 8
- Organized Placement of
variables to reflect pp. 9
Statement of the problem
pp. 7
- Placed Participants first
pp. 9
- Reorganized variables of
Competency by itemizing
Self Efficacy and
Satisfaction under
“Competency”
- Reworded Operational
Definitions
- Changed to “Parenting Front page
Sense of Competence of
Visually Impaired Persons
in Iloilo City”
pp. 2
- Synthesized and Shortened
RRL
pp. 10
- Changed to “Parenting
Competence” and
rearranged in alphabetical
order
pp. 10
- Reflected to Definition of pp. 12
terms pp. 33
- Changed to Past tense
- Described under
Conclusion
Distribution of Participants
- Reflect “Low, Average,
and High Income” in the
definition of terms under
Family Income

Research Locale
- Change to past tense

Statement of the Problem

- Describe SOP 1,2,6,7
under Conclusion