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1I was born on November 10 of 1999 in Colombia in the city of Bogota. I was born in a
hospital of Bogota named the country hospital, my mom had some problems having me, but Commented [s2]: Capitalization required.
at the end me and my mom survived. Colombia has nice arquitecture but most of the things
are so close and there’s to much people in the streets, most of the people walk in the street to
get to their work because there is to much traffic, In Colombia in general the thing that is
different from others is that between neighbors there are friend and help each other, that
happened to me once when I was 13 years old and my mom was late from work and I get
home and my mom wasn´t there yet, I need to stay outside in the stairs and my neighbors
give me food and water because I stay outside like three hours, my neighbors were so nice Commented [s3]: Past or present?
with me. Commented [s4]: Salomé review this sentence, it is way
too long. Please use punctuation in order to separate the
2My family is a catholic family but my dad was Christian when he was Young because his ideas.
family where Cristian, but wen my dad meet my mom my dad thought that catholic people
had less restrictions than Christians but they were better people to so my dad baptized me Commented [s5]: Wrong word.
in catholic religion and in the past of the years all the time we were a catholic family. My Commented [s6]: This sentence is too long. Please review
mom family is big she have 6 nephew but none of them live on Colombia so when we it and separate the ideas with the right punctuation.
travel I play with my cousins, when we travel my cousins that are older than me don´t play
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and they only see their cellphones. My dad had a little family and his mom died when he
was 14years old when she died and his dad move three months later with his lover so my Commented [s8]: She have or has?
dad and my uncle moved because they discover that my granpa had a love out of the Commented [s9]: Singular or plural?
marryage, my sister is named cloe and she moved to peru when I was 15 years old so I
don´t know much about her in the present, but I remember that one day we were in a mall Commented [s10]: Wrong word. You may use small.
and she run away with me and my parent were so furious and they grouded ans take our cell Commented [s11]: Spelling.
phones for one month.
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3I live in Colombia till I had 18 years old, in 2018 I moved to Madrid to start the university Commented [s13]: Spelling.
and I got an apartment Commented [s14]: This sentence is way too long. Please
review it and separate the ideas with the right punctuation.
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4I don´t like the university because I was studing something that wasn´t helping anyone, in
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some of the contitions that people have so I diside to start traveling around to world to
know abouth new cultures and know wath are the problems that people have to me to know
what to study that I could help people, you would be wandering how my parents leave me
do this, I could do this because my family have to much money so I would travel with all
the things that I want but I always like to read and draw the most extraordinary things that i
have seen. in my university I was a really good student ans in school to so I get the
permission to go and travel for a year and find out what I want to study and in any part that
my university have a part were they have other university so I start thinking were I waned
to go and what things I could take to my journey to help people. In my trip I waned to visit Commented [s17]: This sentence is way too long. Please
my sister and surprise her whit a great idea that was to join me in my trip but something review it and separate the ideas, which are excellent, in
order to organize its structure.
happen and that couldn’t happen.
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Commented [s20]: This part is a bit confusing.