Rusli A.

Hakim (21502073037)
Academic Writing (Independent Paragraph)

REVIEW FILM OF FIFTY SHADES OF GREY

The ratting of Fifty Shades of Grey film is only 4 (low ratting) by IMDb due to two
reasons. First of all, the movie that adapted from novel with the same title by E. L. James with
genre fiction erotic that try to describe two persons in love with different characteristics, but
unfortunately there are a lot of unusual or abnormal sexual behavioral without any romantic story
at all. Therefore, it has been made controversial for all people who watch that film. The last
reason, the ending of that film is really worst and unclear.

STUDYING ENGLISH
Studying English as basic demand today’s global because of information communication
and Job requirement. On one hand, English as a global communication in the world to transfer
what we are thinking to other people or express our ideas, feeling, emotions, and suggestions.
For instant, use English competence written or spoken to all people from different country which
are not share the same language, understanding the idea of the writers when we read English
books, English news, watch the television program and many more. On the other hand, many of
job requirement today enforce people to have English competence at least speaking skill. It
shows on several institutions give an opportunity to train English Proficiency for example,
National and Multinational Company in Indonesia such as: Adidas, Asian Central Bank, BNI and
BRI Bank, Coca cola, Citibank, General Motors IMB, Indosat, Telkom, and many more. Is not
only that, hotel and tourism also need English capability also. And the last is TOEFL Test for
entering colleges. All in all, studying English is demanded for all people on today’s global
because English as a global communication in the world and also we have been living on Asian
Economic Environment (MEA) automatically all sector need to have English skill included for
employing a job.
 ENGLISH AND COMMUNICATION
The limitation of achieving English communication for English students is due to two
factors. First, when they are coming to the first English class, they are demanded to communicate
in English well as a daily class language. In fact, English is not used in their daily activities. It
shows when they learn or practice their English only in class material such as: Listening, Speaking,
Reading, Writing or any others else subject that need to use English. It has been a barrier for them
to achieve a good English commuication when in the class or outside of the class. Second, In
English language teaching, students who cannot speak English well are probably have low English
academic competence. Many students have low academic competence is a barrier for them in
English proficiency. On this case, they will have difficulty to participate in class activities less
ability to select appropriate vocabulary and grammar. In conclusion, the limitation use of English
above specially in speaking competence described as lack of exercise and low in academic
competence, so that is why achieving English communication is still hard for English students.