Formatting Did the essay have a Miller Heading? Did the essay’s title have the same size font as the rest of the essay? Were all of the paragraphs indented? Were there quotation marks around the citations? “Quote.” or “Quote,” Was the bibliography/works cited properly formatted? Content Did the introduction have a hook? Did the introduction provide relevant background information? Was the thesis sophisticated? Did the thesis make an argument? Did the topic sentences contain good transitions? Were the topic sentences reasons/facts/details that supported the thesis? Was the “CON” presented in the second paragraph? Did the supporting evidence in all three body paragraphs directly relate to the topic sentence? Were the elaborations directly connected to the supporting evidence? Did the elaborations analyze how the supporting evidence connected to the topic sentences? Did the conclusion restate the thesis or summarize the essay? Did the conclusion encourage or challenge the reader to take action? Was there a bibliography/works cited page included, with at least three sources? Conventions Were most of the words spelled correctly? Did all sentences begin with a capital letter? Did all sentences have the appropriate end mark? Language Was persuasive language used? Was the language used reflective of a 7th-grade level? Overall comments: