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Thesis Statment

Skywalk Cihampelas Bandung

The development of cihampelas bandung skywalk contruction has

become controversial because some people agree and other people do

not agree with it.

Topic Sentence

- 1. Some people agree with the construction of the skywalk

cihampelas bandung

- 2. Some people disagree with the construction of the skywalk

cihampelas bandung
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Suporting sentence 1

- Ridwan Kamil (Wednesday 09-14-2016/Detik.com) Bandung Municipal

Government plays an important role in the skywalk development, specifically

the bandung's mayor who signed the construction of a skywalk that stretches up

to 500 meters from the T-intersection of hospitals to Cihampelas.

- According to one of trader in the skywalk, it makes more sales income for

himself, because he sells bags to make money, so with the skywalk many

people need bags for their luggage, Mr. Anwar (selling bags in the skywalk

area)

- in my opinion the skywalk makes it easier for people to shop at the mall and

more freely, Agia Tyfani (student unpas)

Suporting sentence 2

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Development of Communication

As we know, now is the era of development. The development of the era also
influenced technological developments in various fields such as medical,
communication, transportation and so on. But if studied more deeply,
technological developments in the field of communication will play the greatest
role. For example, the use of smartphones, Smartphones today have changed
very modern, which is practical to use and has a variety of sophisticated and
interesting features. No wonder if in today's era many teenagers like
smartphones. Generally smartphones are used by teenagers for communication,
entertainment and so on. But as we know that the current development and
technology that has taken place has had a big impact on teenagers.The positive
impact of using smartphones for teenagers is that they can explore technology
more broadly than before, facilitating all their activities ranging from visual and
audio communication, and helping them in finding material or assignments on
the internet.Besides the positive impact of course the development of this
smartphone also has a negative impact on adolescents. One of them is the use of
smartphones can make teenagers addicted and have a sense of hunger like can
not live without this device. Not only that, but the use of smartphones that are
too over will have an impact in the form of teenagers will be lazy to learn and
eventually this will reduce their performance.Therefore, as a teenager, we must
be able to use our smartphone device properly and on its portion. If this
smartphone usage is allocated correctly, it will have more positive impacts on
us.