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Introduction
In second language acquisition (SLA), errors are considered to be a natural part of the
learning process and a sign of students' efforts to learn the target language (Gitsaki & Althobait,
2010). Feedback is defined as the immediate reaction to learner errors. In order to give effective
feedback, it needs to indicate to learners if their answer is correct or incorrect, and provide
enough information and guidance to generate the correct target form (Gitsaki & Althobait, 2010).
In a teaching environment, feedback usually refers to the information that is delivered to learners
to accomplish a certain learning task in order to improve and enhance the quality of students'
learning (Suzuki, 2005). Feedback can help language learners to realize their outstanding
problems in the process of SLA and provide them more opportunities to focus on production and
2005). According to Schachter (1991), feedback can be explicit (i.e., a grammatical explanation,
an overt error correction) or implicit (i.e., confirmation checks, repetitions, recasts, clarification
requests.). In the process of language teaching, teachers need to pay attention to the selection and
application of various feedback. According to Lyster and Ranta (1997), feedback consists of the
following six types: explicit correction, metalinguistic feedback, recasts, clarification requests,
and repetition. In addition, comparing various types of feedback is one of the ongoing topics in
Thus, this final project is intended to: a) discuss the background and theoretical
research focused on six types of feedback; c) apply them to the design of lesson plans for
practical use in an ESL/EFL context; and d) offer considerations for educators using feedback.
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Literature Review
According to Fanselow (1977) and Lyster and Ranta (1997), the main errors of students
were as follows:
• L1 use: when a student does not know the target utterance and suddenly uses nontarget
language;
The types of interactional feedback were categorized according to Lyster and Ranta’s
(1997) taxonomy. Definitions of the six types of feedback in this paper precisely followed the
study of Lyster and Ranta (1997), Ellis (2009), Vries, Cucchiarini, Strik and Hout (2010). The
1. Explicit feedback
a) Explicit correction: Explicit correction refers to the process of providing learners with
direct feedback. Teachers can clearly point out that the learner's choice of words are incorrect.
By doing so, they lead the learner’s attention to the mistake (Ranta & Lyster, 1997;
Varnosfadrani & Basturkmen, 2009; Vries, Cucchiarini, Strik & Hout, 2010). Lyster and Ranta
(1997) refer to the explicit provision of the correct form. Sometimes the wrong form is identified
by the student and the right form is provided in the teacher's turn (Ranta & Lyster, 1997). In
addition, Ellis (2009) points out that in explicit correction, the corrector indicates an error has
been committed, identifies the error and provides the correction. Here are some examples:
T: Not on May, In May. We say, “It will start in May.” (Feedback – explicit
correction)
phonological)
T: Yeah, the word banned, you say banned [bӕnd]. (Feedback – explicit)
In the experiment of Varnosfadrani and Basturkmen (2009), they studied the difference
between explicit correction and implicit correction in language learning. In their experiment,
each learner is assigned two different paragraphs and required to read both tasks in the following
two situations. The learner is then asked to reconstruct the content of the article. This means the
learner can retell the content in their own words. Then, the researchers could select one of two
treatment categories, explicit treatment or implicit treatment, to randomly correct some of the
grammatical errors that the learner makes in each task paragraph. The results show that the effect
of explicit correction is more significant than implicit correction. Varnosfadrani and Basturkmen
(2009) speculate that the possible reason for the better effect of explicit correction may be that it
correction involves meta-language feedback and provides the correct form, but the implicit
correction involves only providing the correct form. Given that attention plays a crucial role in
learning, consciousness may be the main reason why the explicit group is better than the implicit
without directly providing the correct form. It points to the nature of the error but tries to elicit
information from the students. This corrective feedback allows the learner to analyze his/her
In order to investigate the effects of the study on language learning, Rezaei and
Derakhshan (2011) chose 60 participants to conduct the experiment. This experiment studies the
effects of two types of error correction feedback (CF) in task-based grammar instruction (TBGI).
After administering a Nelson test, researchers randomly selected 60 participants from the 100
testers. The 60 participants were randomly divided into three groups: recasts, metalinguistic, and
no-feedback group. Each group consisted of 20 participants. The researchers then developed a
test condition and a wish statement to ensure that participants had no prior knowledge of these
target structures. The results of the one-way ANOVA revealed that both recasts and
metalinguistic feedback are effective in TBGI, but that metalinguistic feedback is more effective
in TBGI.
c) Elicitation: According to Lyster and Ranta (1997), elicitation refers to techniques that
teachers use to directly elicit the correct form from the student. One technique is that teachers
elicit completion of their own utterance by strategically pausing to allow students to fill in the
blank as it should be (Lyster & Ranta, 1997). The other technique is that teachers use questions
to elicit correct forms. Either way, teachers do not provide correct forms in their turn (Lyster &
Ranta, 1997). Ellis (2009) clarifies that the corrector repeats some of the learner's utterances, but
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does not repeat the erroneous ones, and in an elevated tone, indicates that the learner should
complete it. The teacher tries to elicit the correct form by asking students to complete a sentence,
asking a question, or requesting a re-enactment (Vries, Cucchiarini, Strik & Hout, 2010). Here
which can make learners correct themselves, and in the process of face-to-face interaction can be
finished by one of the following three ways. One of the strategies is to ask for reformulations of
an ill-formed utterance. The second is through the use of open questions. The least
communicative and therefore the most implicit strategy is to use strategic pauses to get learners
to complete a word. Therefore, the elicitation is in the middle of explicit and implicit continuous
correction feedback. Such corrective feedback is usually not accompanied by other types of
feedback, and each method of implicit feedback or explicit feedback are not identical.
2. Implicit feedback
a) Recasts: Lyster and Ranta (1997) point out these involve the teacher's restatement of
all or part of the student's content, fixing the mistakes. They are generally subtle, because they
are not introduced by phrases like yours or you should say. In other words, the teacher will not
point out that the student made a mistake but give them the correct form. The corrector combines
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the previously incorrect utterances with the changed content words and modifies the utterances
in some way, such as phonological, syntactic, or morphological (Ellis, 2009). Here are some
examples:
Lyster and Ranta (1997) conducted a study in a French Immersion class and found that
recasts are used more frequently (55%) than other types of feedback, such as explicit corrections,
metalinguistic feedback, clarification requests, elicitation, and repetition. However, despite their
high frequency of occurrence, recasts led to the least amount of uptake (31%). Most of the other
feedback types resulted in student uptake (i.e., students corrected their output) in over 80% of the
times they were used. In subsequent studies, Panova and Lyster (2002) studied the type of
feedback and the absorption of the feedback for learners in non-immersion situations and found
similar results. Contrary to naturalistic classroom research, several experimental studies have
shown that recasts have a positive influence on the precise control of certain L2 productions,
such as vocabulary and grammar, at least for a short time (Braidi, 2002; Long, Inagaki, &
Ortega, 1998).
b) Clarification requests: Ellis (2009) talks about how the teacher pointed out that they do
not understand what the learner is saying. Questions indicate that the discourse has been
misunderstood or incorrect and needs to be repeated or reformulated (Vries, Cucchiarini, Strik &
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Hout, 2010). These are all forms of problems. For example, Pardon? Could you repeat it? In
addition, a teacher can try to reveal the wrong expected form with a rising tone. This type of
corrective feedback is used when there is a language problem in the learner's speaking process,
and when the learner's discourse is not understood. Unlike explicit corrections or restatements,
clarifying requests can refer to understandable issues (Lyster & Ranta, 1997). Here are some
examples:
In addition, according to Lyster and Ranta (1997), the questions contained in the
feedback indicate that the statement has been formed or misunderstood and needs to be
reformulated or repeated, and the feedback is determined to clarify the request. Clarification
requests, unlike explicit error corrections, recasts, and translations, can rely more consistently on
generating output from a learner because the clarification request may not provide the learner
with any information about the type or location of the error (Rezaei, Mozaffari & Hatef, 2011).
c) Repetition: Lyster and Ranta (1997) indicate that repetition feedback refers to the
teacher's isolated repeating of a student's erroneous words. In most cases, the teacher adjusts
their tone to highlight the error. Moreover, the teacher repeated the learner's discourse,
emphasizing the error by changing the tone for that section of speech (Ellis, 2009). Here are
some examples:
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phonological)
In addition, according to Rezaei, Mozaffari and Hatef (2011), another way to provide
feedback, repetition is less intrusive and, therefore, is at the hidden extreme in the continuum of
corrective feedback.
Overview of feedback
Table 1 provides examples of all six different types of corrective feedback. Recasts,
clarification requests, and repetition all fall under the category of implicit feedback. Contrarily,
explicit correction, metalinguistic and elicitation feedback fall under the category of explicit
feedback.
Table 1
phonological)
explicit)
grammatical)
(Error – phonological)
grammatical)
phonological)
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clarification)
grammatical)
metalinguistic)
phonological)
grammatical)
repetition)
Through the above literature review, we have explored the specific use methods and
effects of these six kinds of feedback. In the next section, we will choose different types of
feedback for the types of errors that students are prone to in English learning activities. We will
refer to the examples in the literature review for the practical application of each type of
feedback.
Pedagogical development
Course Description: The class is composed of twenty-five elementary school students who are
all from China. The students have low level English abilities, and they are learning the most
basic English grammar points. The course mainly focuses on listening and speaking in order to
1. Students will be able to listen and say these words:friend, I’m=I am,
nice, good morning, too, welcome, back, new, from, America, see, again,
class, we, today, Miss.
2. Learn these sentences: Welcome back to school.
Goals/ Nice to see you again.
Objectives Nice to see you, too.
We have a new friend today.
I’m XXX, I’m from America.
3. Students will be able to speak a dialogue using the new sentences.
4. Students will be interested in English. They will want to talk in
English. And they enjoy communicating.
Key points:
1. New words: friend, I’m=I am, nice, good morning, too, welcome, back,
Key points new, from, America, see, again, class, we, today, Miss.
and 2. New sentences: Nice to see you again.
difficulties Nice to see you, too.
in teaching We have a new friend today.
I’m XXX, I’m from America.
Difficulties:
1. Students can understand this sentence: Welcome back to school.
Warm up:
1. Sing this song: Hello.
2. Teacher and Students T: Hi, boys and girls.
make a talk. Welcome back to
Teach these words: boy, school! XXX, Welcome.
girl, Nice to see you again.
Ⅰ welcome, back, nice, S: Nice to see you, too.
see, again, too. T: XXX, welcome back
Welcome back to to school!
school. / Welcome! Nice to see you again.
Nice to see you again. S: …….
Nice to see you, too.
(a)
Presentation:
1. Teach: Good morning. T: Good morning, boys
and girls!
2. T shows Amy’s S: Good morning,
headwear, Teach: teacher.
class, we, new, friend, T: Class, we have a new
Ⅱ today. friend today. Look, who
● Class, we have a is she?
new friend today. S: Amy.
T: Please read after me:
We have a new friend
today, she is Amy.
T: Now, look at me.
Hello, Amy.
3. Amy shows the flag of Amy: Hi! I’m Amy. I’m
America. from America.(1)
T shows the flag of T: Welcome, Amy. I’m
China. XXX, I’m from China.
Teach: I’m=I am, How about you? Please
from, America. (b) come here and introduce
● I’m XXX, I’m from yourself, like this: I’m
America. XXX, I’m from China.
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Practice:
1. Read the new words T: Now, read after me.
and new sentences. T: “Let’s do a game. I
2. Do a game: T shows will show the headwear
the headwear and the and the flag, you come
Ⅲ flag, Ss say the sentence. here and say this
sentence: I’m Amy. I’m
3. Let’s use these from America. Others
sentences. say: “Welcome!” or
4. Ss listen to the tape, “Nice to meet you.”
and read the text. (c) (2)”
Homework 1. Write new words and new sentences, the requirements: Students need to copy
a new word once and a new sentence twice.
Unit 2 My family
Goals/ Objectives 1. Students will be able to listen and say these words: sister,
brother, big, help, each other, together.
2. Learn these sentences: What a big fish! Help each other.
3. Students will be able to introduce their family member.
4. Students will be interested in English, they like to
communicate, and they feel happy in it.
Key points:
1. New words: sister, brother, big, help, each other, together.
Key points and 2. New sentence: What a big fish!
difficulties in Help each other.
teaching Difficulties:
1. Pupil can remember new sentences.
Warm up:
Ⅰ 1. “Let’s sing the song: We are
family.”
2.Daily dialogue. T: Who is he? Do
T shows own family member’s you know? Ask me,
photo. please. Come on!
Who can try?
S1: Who’s that man?
T: Guess!
S1: Is he your friend?
T: No, he’s my
grandpa.
Presentation:
1. Read the text of “Let’s talk”,
then act it. T: What’s this?
2. T points the fish and shows a Ss: This is a fish.
picture of a big fish. T: Is it that fish? I
Teach: What a big fish! think it isn’t. What a
Ⅱ T shows the pictures of “big big fish! (3)
and small”. T points the big T: What a big sheep!
one. What a big people!
3. T shows a picture of clown. T: What’s this? Who
Teach: Help each other. can help me?
Play together. T: In our class, we
can help each other.
T: And in our class,
we can play together.
Practice:
1. Let’s chat.
2. Read new words and new T: “Now, I will
sentences. divide you into
Ⅲ three groups,
let’s match who
can do quickly.”
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Warm up:
1. Sing this song: One Two Three
Four Five
Ⅰ 2. T shows the picture about T: What can you see in
kites, cats and rabbits. the picture?
Ss: I can see ………
teacher can
use
clarification
feedback. For
example, the
teacher says
“what do you
say?” and the
teacher tries to
let the student
recognize the
mistake by
repeating the
answer.
Ⅲ Practice:
1. Let's play. T: How many ……s do
T shows the pictures, Ss you have?
practice the sentence patterns. Ss: I have …….
T: Eleven.
2.T gives every Ss a picture, S1: How many ……s do
then says a number, and the Ss you have?
practice the sentence pattern. S2: I have eleven.
Discussion
The course content we designed is for elementary so the grammar points of the course are
very basic and simple. In this section, I will discuss two aspects of the lessons.
> According to the types of errors (the parts marked has been bolded and used English
letters in the lesson plans) that students may have in the course of the above teaching activities,
what types of feedback can we choose?
> Which parts can be improved in the design of the above teaching activities (Arabic
numerals in the lesson plans)?
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First, discuss the teacher’s choice of feedback in the teaching process. In part (1), the
teacher needs the students to use the sentence pattern I’m……. to answer the question. However,
this is the first time for the student to learn and use the sentence pattern of I am/I’m, so students
may miss am/’m in the process of answering. This is a grammatical error. For these kinds of
grammatical errors and according to the literature review, we can use the metalinguistic
feedback, elicitation, and recasts.
> Metalinguistic Feedback:
S: I from America.
T: I from… where is the be verb?
> Elicitation:
S: I from America.
T: I……?
> Recasts:
S: I from America.
T: I from.
In addition, in part (3), the students may miss a before the single noun, and in part (4), the
students may miss the plura; s after the word. It is possible to have errors in both parts, so these
two parts also can apply the metalinguistic feedback, elicitation, and recasts.
In part (2), the students may make errors in the pronunciation of flag[flæg]. In view of the
phonological errors, teachers can use explicit feedback, elicitation, and clarification requests.
> Explicit Feedback:
S: I’m Amy. I’m from America [əˈmɛrɪkən].
T: Say [əˈmɛrɪkə], not [əˈmɛrɪkən].
> Elicitation:
S: I’m Amy. I’m from America [əˈmɛrɪkən].
T: America….
> Clarification Requests:
S: I’m Amy. I’m from America [əˈmɛrɪkən].
T: What did you say?
Then, several parts of the three lesson plans can be improved.
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> In part (a), the teacher should explain when to use “too” in a sentence and why to use
“too”. This can help students correctly decide when to use "too", compared to “to” or “two” in
their speaking or writing.
> In part (b), the teacher should explain in a simplified form, and provide some exercises
to help the students to remember the grammar point.
> In part (c), it’s too boring that teachers always ask the students to use the new sentence
pattern to answer the question. The teacher can design some interesting activities to help students
use the new sentence patterns (i.e., role play).
> In part (d), for this homework, the teacher can give the students homework of recording
a video. Both the students and teacher can find errors in the videos and correct them.
> In part (e), before letting the students count the number of the pencils, the teacher
should spend some time on explaining how to express plural nouns.
unavoidable in the process of learning English. There are many ways for teachers to correct
mistakes, such as recasts, metalinguistic feedback, or explicit correction. Besides, teachers can
give written or spoken feedback. Feedback is very important for improving and developing
necessary knowledge and skills for learners. Students can reflect on themselves and improve
their abilities from teachers’ feedback. Feedback is not a one size fits all process. For example,
feedback as recasts focuses on grammatical and lexical errors, while repetition feedback can
As future teachers, we should know how to use different types of feedback for students’
learning. Correction is a part of teaching (Edge,1989), therefore, this helps students gain focus
when dealing with feedback, and they will see their problems and correct them. In addition,
teachers can help students significantly improve their speaking, listening, reading, and writing
skills by determining which type of feedback is most effective in a specific area. According to
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Topping (1998), peer feedback can be beneficial for learning, which might be due to the
differences from teacher feedback since learners may feel more confident or less nervous with
their peers. In our future English teaching, we will consider using peer feedback to help learners
become more critical writers and better readers of their own writing. For us, we think teachers
have a clear responsibility to develop students’ learning abilities by providing feedback so that
students can begin to develop fluency. When providing feedback, teachers must consider each
student individually. Classrooms are full of different learners. Some students need to be pushed
to a higher level, and others need to be dealt with very gently, so as not to interfere with learning
and damage self-esteem. It is important to balance the feelings of students and provide
appropriate feedback. Also, one-on-one meetings with students are one of the most effective
ways to provide feedback. Students will receive individualized attention and be allowed
opportunities to raise the necessary questions in a safe environment. As with all aspects of
Appendix A
Lesson plan 1
1. Flags
America
China
Canada
Amy’s headwear
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2. Song
https://youtu.be/tVlcKp3bWH8
Appendix B
Lesson plan 2
1. Word card
2. Photos
Family photo
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Fish Clown
3. Song
https://youtu.be/iwfxe-lIKtw
Appendix C
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Lesson plan 3
1. Slides
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2. Song
https://youtu.be/QIIBRB6r0mk
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