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by Christian Alistair Dumaup
One-Sent Def
I love your use of first person here, but do know that Trefil's text doesn't use it, so it would be inappropriate for our
assigned context.
add example
great example!
nor?
without the addition of outside forces?
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SIMILARIT Y INDEX
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INT ERNET SOURCES
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PUBLICAT IONS
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www.eoht.info
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en.wikibooks.org
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Submitted to University of Salford
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Submitted to University of Glamorgan
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assignmenttutors.blogspot.com
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teaching.ncl.ac.uk
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Submitted to American Intercontinental
University Online
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www.swanagetoylibrary.org.uk
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www.authorstream.com
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www.advanced-steam.org
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www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov
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Spyros G Tzafestas. "Energy, Information,
Feedback, Adaptation, and Self-organization",
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Springer Nature, 2018
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QM One-Sent Def
In Markel on Def initions, we learned a strategy f or writing one-sentence def inition, and our
prompt requires students to begin their def initions with one. Can you add one?
Text Comment. I love your use of f irst person here, but do know that T ref il's text doesn't
use it, so it would be inappropriate f or our assigned context.
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QM citation add
You need a citation here.
QM caption add
you need a caption to explain the relevance of this picture, f igure, or illustration.
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Text Comment. Since these are "laws," you can quote them directly (avoid plagiarism)
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Text Comment. a URL isn't a suf f icient citation. Use Purdue Owl's machine if you like.
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RUBRIC: 36 3 DEFINITION RUBRIC
ABSENT OR BELOW Audience's needs are of ten not recognized: terms and ideas need explanation and
BASIC language needs adjustment f or the audience. Purpose (to def ine or term or
concept)isn't clear or achieved.
DEVELOPING Shows some attention to audience's needs, sometimes def ining necessary terms and
ideas and using audience-appropriate language. Purpose (to def ine or term or
concept) may be unclear at times, and it may not be achieved convincingly.
PROFICIENT Shows attention to audience's needs, def ining necessary terms and ideas and using
audience-appropriate language. Purpose (to def ine or term or concept) may be
implied, but it's clear and achieved.
ADVANCED Shows sophisticated attention to audience's needs, def ining necessary terms and
ideas and using audience-appropriate language. Purpose (to def ine a term or
concept) is clear and achieved with style.
ABSENT OR BELOW Omits or uses incorrectly quotation marks and/or MLA-, APA-, or Wikipedia-style
BASIC (number system) parenthetical citations and works cited list. Many citation errors.
Does not cite f rom a variety of discipline-appropriate sources. May be over-reliant on
a single source.
PROFICIENT Correctly uses quotation marks and MLA-, APA-, or Wikipedia-style (number system)
parenthetical citations and works cited list. May have 1-2 citation errors. Cites f rom a
variety of discipline-appropriate sources.
ADVANCED Consistently and correctly uses quotation marks and MLA-, APA-, or Wikipedia-style
(number system) in-text (parenthetical) and end-of -text (ref erence list) citations f or
all sources, whether quoted directly or paraphrased. Cites f rom a variety of discipline-
appropriate sources. Never over-reliant on a single source.
PERS/SUPPORT Advanced
SLO #3: Compare, evaluate, synthesize, and communicate caref ully, objectively, and persuasively the
relative merits of alternative or opposing arguments, assumptions, and cultural values.
ABSENT OR BELOW Fails to support claims with specif ic explanations, examples, etc.. Objectivity may be
BASIC lacking.
DEVELOPING Attempts to support claims with explanations, examples, etc., but specif icity and/or
objectivity may be lacking.
PROFICIENT Usually supports the def inition's claims with relevant, thorough, and specif ic
explanations, examples, etc.. Usually maintains objectivity.
ADVANCED Supports the def inition's claims with relevant, thorough, and specif ic explanations,
examples, etc.. Maintains objectivity.
ABSENT OR BELOW Organizational devices (one-sentence def inition; introduction; logical partitioning;
BASIC topic sentences, headings, transitions) may be absent, unrelated to the prompt, or
illogically connected. Ps contain multiple topics or are disorganized.
ADVANCED Clear, specif ic organizational devices (one-sentence def inition; introduction; logical
partitioning; topic sentences, headings, transitions) f it the prompt and tie ideas and
topics together logically and seamlessly. Paragraphs are unif ied.
ABSENT OR BELOW Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability. Language may
BASIC ref lect a gender or cultural bias or be too high or too low. Design may be
unconventional and inef f ective.
DEVELOPING Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors of ten impede readability or otherwise
distract f rom meaning. Style may be either too high or too low. Language may
occasionally suggest a gender or cultural bias. Design may be inconventional or
inef f ective.
PROFICIENT Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors are f ew and do not distract f rom
meaning. Middle-level-style. Language respects gender and cultural dif f erences.
Design is conventional and ef f ective.
ADVANCED Outstanding control of language, with middle-level style, including ef f ective diction
and sentence variety. Language respects gender and cultural dif f erences. Design is
conventional and ef f ective.