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Smart-heat clothes
-Defeat the cold, make your own style.
Have you ever been annoyed with freezing temperature of the winter, especially the frigid
Korean winter coming now? Do you feel you cannot go anywhere out of your bed every winter
morning? However, it can be much even worse when you have to wear neatly in the important
event, but, your body wants many layers of bulky clothes to stay warm. That is tragic! “Good
clothes open all doors”- the great scholar Thomas Fuller (Ethos) once said. This seriously could
not be truer. Because the elegant look is the most fundamental tool to build up those crucial
mental impressions during the encounters, dressing nicely is necessary. However, choosing the
right clothes is not a cup of tea, especially for winter clothes. How can we both stay warm and
still look nice? (Attention Grabber) Luckily, the solution is in front of your eyes now, and
overcoming the winter has never been easier! Here is the rundown on this brand new, the state-
of-art technology applied winter clohtes, the Smart-heat clothes. Smoother than silk, warmer
than duck down coat, weightless, extremely body fitting and comfortable with the moderate price.
You absolutely need to bring the Smart-heat clothes to your home now! (Thesis) First of all,
Smart-heat is the cutting edge technology. And second, the Smart-heat clothes is more than what
you need for ideal winter clothes. It’s time to say bye to the annoying bulky, untidy look and
hello to the elegance and cozy style. (Preview of Main Points)
Let’s begin by (Transition) taking a look at this innovative technology, the Smart-heat
technology. (Main Point 1) Smart-heat was originally inspired with a simple but radical idea
about a single thin layer of fabric to defeat the winter. Smart-heat fabric capitalizes off the
advanced infrared heat technology, which is developed by Prof. Faming Wang of Lunds
University. (Logos)He theorized that the natural healing process of our bodies ( for examples,
tissue regeneration or toxin removal) will increase the rate under the Far Infrared light rays
( FIR ) captured in rare amount of sunlight.(Theory) Consequently, FIR penetrates in our bodies
to increase the tissue temperature. Therefore, Smart-heat can re-invent warmth from the
outside.(Sub-point 1).In addition, it is extraordinary thermal retention.(sub-point 2) Since,
Smart-heat fabric often contain the superlight microfiber cover which is completely windproof
and water resistance to eliminate the thermal waste. (fact)
Now I know you now might wonder about: (Transition) Is it comfortable enough? Does it fit my
body? Is it light enough? Can I use wash it by machine? Of course, Yes. The Smart-heat fabric is
the cutting edge clothing material that offers extra functions for daily activities. (Main Point 2)
It defines the new concept of stretchable comfort. (sub-point 1) Thanks to the ultra-light
microfibers technology, Smart-heat gives you a perfect fit, extraordinary comfort and weightless
feeling. (fact) (Logos) It idealizes every movement of your body! (Speculation)You can do
extreme exercise without worrying about your heaviness of clothes and limited comfort.
(Speculation) Furthermore, it is never-before-seen anti-static fabric. (sub-point 2) Because of
the elasticity of the microfibers, the fabric also reduces the static electricity. (fact) (Logos) So
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can you see how Smart-heat clothes help people to share a warm hug, not a static electricity
shocks, with loved ones? (Pathos)
“Smart-heat clothes” is the worth knowing name for anyone who ever suffers the cold. (Thesis)
Its cutting-edge technology brings the solution to change the way we dress and, to change the
winter across the globe. (Preview of main point) The cold will never bother you anyway! This
is the must-have product for everyone! Because Thomas Fuller’s lifelong experiences tell us,
clothes not only enhance appearance but also aim to accredit you to some particular audience.
(Attention Grabber) So don’t delay! Act now! Get your own Smart-heat clothes today! Now on
sale at every major shopping mall all over the country. (Call to Action)
References:

 Good Clothes Open All Doors. (2016, August 31). Retrieved November 1, 2018, from
https://www.nabanitadhar.in/good-clothes-open-all-doors/

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Cong Thi Hong Hanh( 20162019)