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Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to
bring about a change.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
human practices. While some argue that it is possible to change this, I personally believe that
There are two main reasons why people hold negative views about changing the environmental
the environment and is thus harmful to plants and animals. Plastic , for example, have become Commented [ab5]: ‘are’ again referring to the main noun
in the sentence which is plural.
situation. For individuals, they can choose products with less packaging, stop drinking bottled
water and use reusable bags. For governments, they can make it illegal for companies to produce
In conclusion, I believe that we can do much to improve the environment for trees and animals.
Comment:
IELTS Marking Criteria My comments Band score
Overall Score: 7.0 + – A clear and well-developed position is presented in response to the
question.