The provided graph presents a the share growth of the U.S Commented [MM1]: Less than 125 words!!!

immigrants aged 25 or over have having high qualifications Commented [MM2]: Why have?

(Bachelor or postgraduate degree) between 1960 and 2016.

Getting back to the details, As it’sit is clear, they were nearly the Commented [MM3]: Choose another phrase.
Commented [MM4]: What?! Have you explicated it
same by 2.5% at the beginning of the process. then Then, degrees beforehand?
trends surged slowly by 8.5 and 7.0 percentage in exactly 1980. Commented [MM5]: Really?!
Following this, the trend of Bachelor degree climbed gradually,
however, postgraduate trend remained stable over 10years. After
1990s,it can be seen that, they increased with a bit changes in next
26 years. Commented [MM6]: Redundant! They increased?! How?
Write it with details.

In conclusion, both trends either Bachelor degree or post graduated

degree went up(Bachelor by 17.2% , post graduate degree by
12.8%). Also, bachelor trend was a well head of post graduated
trend from 1980s to 2016.

Expected band:

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Task Coherence and Lexical
range and
achievement cohesion resource
accuracy
Band 6.5 6 6 6
Overall 6