Professional Documents
Culture Documents
CONTENTS
Ursula Wingate
Department of Education and Professional Studies
King’s College London
2009
Here are the main features that distinguish academic writing from
some other types of writing.
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In some types of writing, you can make claims on the basis of your
personal opinions or assumptions. In academic writing, you must
provide appropriate justification for your claims through arguments
and evidence.
2. STRUCTURE
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Assignments and dissertations need a clear structure with headings
and sub-headings for the various chapters and sections. The
sections need to be structured by paragraphs.
The Conclusion should give the reader the clear impression that
the purposes of the assignment have been achieved. It typically
includes:
• A summary of the main points (discussed in the Main
Text)
• Concluding statements drawn from these points
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as ‘Research Methodology’, ‘Findings’, and ‘Discussion of Findings’.
The structure of the dissertation is discussed in section 7.
2.2. Signposting
Signposting is an important feature of academic writing which
enables the reader to follow your development of the topic. You
need to signal how the various sections of your writing link together,
and what you are going to discuss next and why.
There are two aspects to signposting: 1) saying where you are; 2)
saying where you are going.
Below is an example of signposting, where the signposting devices
are highlighted in bold print.
2.3. Paragraphs
Example: Paragraphs
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The teaching of foreign languages within the UK Topic
educational system has given rise to a number of
concerns over the years. These have been related to Examples
such issues as the most appropriate age for
commencement of language learning (Burstall et al,
1974), the most appropriate teaching methodologies Focusing on
(Richards & Rogers, 1986), and the relative key aspect
achievements of girls and boys (Graham & Rees, 1995;
Clark & Trafford, 1996). However, the major concern
has undoubtedly been the apparent reluctance of the
British to learn a foreign language at all, and the
declining level of achievement in this domain
(Saunders, 1998). As we move into an era where our New
future will need to be based on multilingualism Paragraph:
(Graddol, 1997), such a situation has serious New topic
consequences. Details of topic
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Example: Use of Tables
Another model of motivation was developed by Ritchie and Martin (1999).
The categories and some factors are listed in Table 1.
3. STYLE
Academic writing does not require a style or vocabulary that is
radically different from other types of writing, e.g. writing you might
have done professionally or for your first degree. Nor does it require
an overuse of technical jargon. You are expected to express yourself
in a clear, accurate, concise, objective and coherent manner.
3.1. Clarity
It is a myth that academic writing requires a ‘sophisticated’ style
with long sentences, complex expressions, and technical jargon.
Avoid overlong sentences and cut out redundant words and phrases.
This is illustrated in the following example.
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Avoid tautology (using two or more words with the same
meaning): for instance, expressions such as new innovation, past
history.
3.3. Coherence
Coherence means that the text within paragraphs is well linked, and
that the paragraphs are linked with each other. Coherence can be
achieved with linking words and phrases (and/but, however,
consequently, although…).
Adding ideas: and, also, as well as, besides, finally, first (second, third,
etc.), finally, furthermore, in addition, likewise, similarly.
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Comparing ideas: in the same way, likewise, similarly.
(from: http://asp.wlv.ac.uk/Level4.asp?UserType=6&Level4=634;
University of Wolverhampton website)
Example: Coherence
The teaching of foreign languages within the UK educational
system has given rise to a number of concerns over the
years. These [1] have been related to such issues as the
most appropriate age for commencement of language
learning (Burstall et al, 1974), the most appropriate
teaching methodologies (Richards & Rogers, 1986), and the
relative achievements of girls and boys (Graham & Rees,
1995; Clark & Trafford, 1996). However [2], the major
concern has undoubtedly been the apparent reluctance of
the British to learn a foreign language at all, and the
declining level of achievement in this domain (Saunders,
1998). As we move into an era where our future will need to
be based on multilingualism (Graddol, 1997), such a
situation [3] has serious consequences.
[1]Referring back to ‘concerns’
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4. REFERENCES AND QUOTATIONS
Within the text, only the author’s name(s), publication date, and –in
case of direct quotations- page numbers, are presented. Below,
you see examples and explanations of the various forms of
partial references.
In example 6, there are more than two authors. For space reasons,
only the first author, Boyle, is named, the others are referred to with
‘et al’. Their names are listed in the Reference List.
In examples 5 and 6, the name(s) of the author was not in the
bracket but integrated in the text. This way of citation gives more
prominence to the author’s voice. Below, you find verbs/ phrases
that can be used in integral references.
points out
argues
preventative medicine is far more
maintains
Smith (2003) that cost effective, and therefore better
claims
adapted to the developing world.
concludes
suggests
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publications, but instead of the author, the name of the organisation
appears.
Cortazzi, M., & Jin, L. (1996). English teaching and learning in China.
Language Teaching 29, 61—80 [as it would be cited in TESOL
Quarterly]
Cortazzi, M., & Jin, L. (1996). English teaching and learning in China.
Language Teaching, 29, 61-80. [as it would be cited in The Modern
Language Journal]
As David Graddol warns in the report, ‘Speaking English alone will not
be enough to ensure a full and productive participation in the 21st
Century’ (1997, p. 29).
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On King’s homepage, click ISS (Information Services and Systems), then click One Space on the top
bar. In One Space, click Study on the top bar. Databases and E-Journals are in the right-hand menu
under the heading ‘Connect to’.
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On King’s homepage, click ISS, and then ISS Catalogue on the right-side menu.
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sources which you will have to reduce to a ‘short-list’ with
the most relevant items.
Textbooks
Textbooks provide summaries of research without giving you the
details of the original research studies. The textbook author has
already interpreted the research in a way that you might not agree
with. Also, the textbook author might have emphasised aspects that
are not relevant for your topic. For your assignments and
dissertation, it is important that you read beyond textbooks and try
to get up-to-date knowledge of recent research in your research
area.
‘Front-line literature’
According to Wallace & Wray (2006), ‘front-line’ literature consists
mainly of journal articles, books, and reports that provide theoretical
work, reports of original research, accounts of current practice and
policy statements. These sources provide direct information for your
research.
For the value of various sources (textbooks, readers and handbooks,
reports, policy statements, websites, see Wallace & Wray, 2006, pp.
17 – 25).
The Internet
Much literature is now available online (e-journals, access to print
journals electronically – see 5.1.). There are powerful search engines
(i.e. Google Scholar) that direct you to downloadable files. For
internet sources such as Wikipedia or any other sites to which
individuals can contribute without peer review see 4.2.
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5.3. Reading strategies
Your reading will be most effective if you take the following two
steps:
Reading critically means first that you approach your sources with
clear questions in mind, i.e. that you are constantly questioning the
relevance of the text to your own topic (see 5.3.). Secondly, it
means that you critically analyse the authors’ arguments. Wallace
and Wray (2006) explain what distinguishes an argument from an
opinion.
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What is an argument?
Argument: Conclusion (claim) + Warrant (reason for the conclusion; e.g.
evidence from the author’s research or professional experience
Opinion: Unwarranted conclusion – no explanation is given for claim.
(Wallace & Wray, 2006: 27)
Evaluating an argument means that you have to assess whether the
warrant is convincing. If you make counter-claims, you must have
sufficient warrant to support them.
6. DEVELPOING AN ARGUMENT
The term ‘argument’ is referred to in different ways in academic
writing. On the one hand, it means a claim that is based on a
warrant (see 5.4.), rather than an opinion that is not supported by
any evidence. In an academic paper, on the other hand, it means
the way in which you explain and develop your topic. In this sense,
‘argument’ encompasses: (1) a logical structure of your paper in
which –sometimes- contradictory claims are discussed, and which
enables the reader to follow, through signposting and headings, how
you deal with the topic, (2) your critical analysis of existing
literature from the viewpoint of your own experience and/or
research, and (3) the development of your own stance, based on
your literature review and your own experience/research.
Considering the range of possible topics, there is no template for
developing an argument, but the following steps may help.
This structure can vary, for instance Chapter 4 can be split into two
chapters: 4. Findings, and 5. Discussion. When the research is based
on quantitative data, it may be more appropriate to present the
numerical results in the ‘Findings’ chapter, followed by a
‘Discussion’ chapter. In qualitative research, it is more to common
to present findings and discussion in one chapter.
7.1. Introduction
This chapter presents the (1) background and (2) the aim and
objectives of your study, i.e. the relevance of topic; the reasons for
your interest in it, and (briefly, because this will be dealt with in
more detail in the Literature Review) the current knowledge of the
topic. You may ‘frame’ your own research here, stating that is a
need for doing that research to fill knowledge gaps (for instance,
teaching learning strategies may have been well researched in
other contexts, but not in yours). At this point, you may want to
point out what your research is going to contribute to existing
knowledge in your field.
Leading on from (1) and (2), you may state your (3) Research
questions. However, it may be better to state the research
questions at the end of Chapter 2, the Literature Review, after you
have considered the current research findings and discussion of the
topic.
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Next, provide an (4) Outline of your dissertation with a brief
overview of the following chapters.
Make sure that you focus on the literature that is relevant to your
topic and point out where the literature leaves knowledge gaps for
your context. Again, this chapter offers you the opportunity to show
that you are making a contribution to knowledge in your context. Do
not just summarise your sources, rather select and discuss the
themes that are relevant to your topic and the current discussion of
the topic.
7.3. Methodology
In this chapter, you need to justify why you chose certain methods
of enquiry, and why your methods are capable of answering your
research questions. For this justification you may have to link back
to the Literature Review (for instance by saying that previous
quantitative research did not find in-depth explanations, and
therefore you are choosing different methods, such as interviews).
In addition to the choice of methods, you have to discuss the
following issues in this chapter:
• Ethical considerations
• Recruitment of participants: why did you choose them and
how did you get them to participate?
• Data collection procedures: how will you administer your
questionnaire, conduct your interviews or observations?
• Data analysis: how will you analyse your data (statistical
procedures, content analysis, discourse analysis, etc).
7.5. Conclusion
In addition to a summary of your research, the following points need
to be addressed in this chapter:
• Limitations of your research
• Implications of findings –your contribution to knowledge
• Recommendations of action to be taken
• Suggestions for future research
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Appendices
Examples from your data, for instance the questionnaire you used or
extracts from interview transcripts can be presented in Appendices.
References:
Fairbairn, G. & Fairbairn, S. (2001) Reading at university. Buckingham:
Open University Press
Fairbairn, G. & Winch, C. (1996) Reading, writing and reasoning.
Buckingham: Open University Press
Wallace, M. & Wray, A. (2006) Critical reading and writing for
postgraduates. London: Sage.
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