Treatment

The Mystery Package

It is proposed that this video will be 3min to 5min in duration filmed at only 2 locations and edited at a class room
within the university.

The filming will take place at the University of Greenwich Avery hill site during early March and will last
approximately one to two days. The editing will take place at the apple Mac room during early March and will last
for one to two days.

The video will include the following:

Two live character
A Title sequence
The duration will be between three and five minute long.
The video will include a soundtrack

The video will include examples of continuity including all the techniques below:
Shot, reverse shot
Matched eye line
Matched action
All obeying the 180 degree and 30 degree rules
The video will also include 30 to 60 seconds of montage

Locations
The video will have two locations.
Bedroom
And a kitchen

Style
This video will be the form of a mysterious James bond style of filming. I will attempt to film in a film NOIR STYLE

Characters

Kele,
Julian

Plot
The plot of the story is a young man sells a mystery parcel to another young man. Throughout the video there will
be subtitles interacting with the audience for them to guess what the mystery parcel could be.
Video Structure
Fade
in
Title/Credit Sequence: THE MYSTERY PARCEL

Fade out

Scene 1
Fade in:

We see a set of hand on the royal mail tracking website and tracks a parcel. The post box is opened and a parcel is
taking out

We see a hand reaching for a phone and starts writing a message.

‘It has been received, come over now make sure your not followed’.
The phone is thrown on the bed and we see the set of hands reaching for a parcel from inside of a cupboard.

Julian turns of his light form his room and walks out his flat across the path way and rings kele’s door bells.
Kele puts the parcel back into the cupboard and buzzes Julian in. He opens the door for Julian and lets him they
both go into the bedroom of Kele. Kele searches him to make sure he is not wired and they take a seat on the bed

Fade out

Scene 2
Kele goes into the cupboard and takes out the parcel and places it onto the table of his room. He looks out side of
his room door to check that there is no one there and then closes the door.
Julian takes out a knife. He turns to Kele and asks to sample the product. Julian cuts the parcel and puts a finger
into the parcel and tastes the parcel.
Julian
“Pure, shit, were good to go”.
We see the exchange of money and then the shaking of hands.

Fade out to black

Fade in from black

Scene 3
We are in the kitchen of Julian. He walks over to the kitchen sink starts to wash his hands. The camera zooms in
onto his hands and we see him grabbing the bottle of washing up liquid. He leaves the pipes running and at which
time he takes out a metal object from the kitchen cupboard and puts it on the stove. He boils the kettle. After the
kettle has boiled he pours the water into the pot. He turns the stove on. He puts the contents of the parcel into
the pot. We see smoke coming from the stove. We takes out a boil from the cupboard and pours out porridge
oats into the boil.
STORYBOARD
Shot list
SCENE 1
Shot 1
Kele goes on to royal mail website and he tracks a parcel.
 Shot from behind with the laptop in view (from the bed)
 Shot of kele from over the shoulder of kele
 Shot from the laptop web cam of kele on the laptop

Shot 2
Kele goes to the mail box down stair and takes out the parcel from the post box
 Kele gets up from the laptop. (Point of view shot getting up and opening the door of his
room)
 A long shot of kele closing his room door and walking along the corridor of his flat ( long shot
from the kitchen door )
 Point of view shot of kele walking down the stairs to the mail box.
 Close up shot of kele hands taking out his keys and opening the mail box. Another close up
shot of him taking out a parcel from the mail box.

Shot 3
Kele hands take his mobile phone and write a text message
 (Close up shot) focusing on the phone with his hands in view writing the massage.
 A medium shot of him writing the message.

Shot 4
Julian receiving the text message
 A shot of Julian watching TV in his room.
 Close up shot of Julian’s phones receiving the message
 Close up shot of taking the phone and opening the message.
 The camera is now focused on the phones screen and the message opens.

Shot 5

 Julian turns of the lights in his room and closes his doors.
 (P.O.V)We see him ringing the door bell of Kele and waiting to be let in.
FADE OUT.

SCENE 2

Shot 1

 Kele hears the door bell and lets Julian in.

 Julian and kele both go in to kele rooms.
 Kele searches Julian to make sure he is not wired.

Shot 2
 POV shot of Julian coming into the room.
 A medium shot of the deal.
 A shot from the web cam on my laptop.

SCENE 3
 A variety of different shots of Julian preparing the cake and waiting for it.
 A Shot from the table of Julian (montage) eating the cake.
AUTHORIZATION TO REPRODUCE PHYSICAL LIKENESS AND/OR
VOICE

I hereby irrevocably grant to OMAR LOY (herein "Producer") and any

parent, subsidiary and affiliated corporations and their respective
successors, assigns, licensees, employees and agents, the right in
perpetuity throughout the universe, and in all now known and hereafter
existing media, and in any language, to use my name (including any
fictitious names heretofore or hereafter used by me), physical likeness
and/or voice in and in connection with the production, exhibition,
exploitation, merchandising, advertising and promotion of the motion
picture tentatively entitled The mystery Package

I agree that the foregoing grant includes the right to use my physical
likeness in any form, including, without limitation, a photograph, picture,
artistic rendering, silhouette or other reproduction by photograph, film,
tape, or otherwise.

I represent to the best of my knowledge that the consent of no other

persons, firm corporation or labour organization is required to enable
Producer to use my name, likeness and/or voice as described herein and
that such use will not violate the rights of any third parties.

I acknowledge that nothing herein requires Producer to use my likeness

and/or voice as described herein or in connection with the Picture.

The rights granted herein include the right to use the Picture or excerpts
or stills form the Picture (include excerpts or stills containing my likeness
and/or voice) in any other motion picture, publication, recording, or other
medium and includes the right to edit, delete, and/or juxtapose (with any
other part of the Picture), any part of the Picture in which I appear,
and/or change the sequence of events in the Picture.

All rights, title and interest in and to the results and proceeds of the
services and performances rendered by me in connection with the
production of the Picture or any portion therefore shall, from its inception,
be the sole property of Producer, free from any claim whatsoever by me
or any other person.

This agreement contains the full and complete understanding between the
parties and supersedes all prior agreements and understandings
pertaining hereto and cannot be modified except by writing signed by
each party.

I hereby certify and represent that I am of legal age and have every right
to contract in my own name in connection with this Release, and that I
have read the foregoing and fully understand the meaning and effect
thereof, and intending to be legally bound I have signed this Authorization
this day of , 2010.

__________________
Print Name

__________________
Signature

__________________
Address

__________________
Date
AUTHORIZATION TO REPRODUCE PHYSICAL LIKENESS AND/OR
VOICE

I hereby irrevocably grant to OMAR LOY (herein "Producer") and any

parent, subsidiary and affiliated corporations and their respective
successors, assigns, licensees, employees and agents, the right in
perpetuity throughout the universe, and in all now known and hereafter
existing media, and in any language, to use my name (including any
fictitious names heretofore or hereafter used by me), physical likeness
and/or voice in and in connection with the production, exhibition,
exploitation, merchandising, advertising and promotion of the motion
picture tentatively entitled The mystery Package

I agree that the foregoing grant includes the right to use my physical
likeness in any form, including, without limitation, a photograph, picture,
artistic rendering, silhouette or other reproduction by photograph, film,
tape, or otherwise.

I represent to the best of my knowledge that the consent of no other

persons, firm corporation or labour organization is required to enable
Producer to use my name, likeness and/or voice as described herein and
that such use will not violate the rights of any third parties.

I acknowledge that nothing herein requires Producer to use my likeness

and/or voice as described herein or in connection with the Picture.

The rights granted herein include the right to use the Picture or excerpts
or stills form the Picture (include excerpts or stills containing my likeness
and/or voice) in any other motion picture, publication, recording, or other
medium and includes the right to edit, delete, and/or juxtapose (with any
other part of the Picture), any part of the Picture in which I appear,
and/or change the sequence of events in the Picture.

All rights, title and interest in and to the results and proceeds of the
services and performances rendered by me in connection with the
production of the Picture or any portion therefore shall, from its inception,
be the sole property of Producer, free from any claim whatsoever by me
or any other person.

This agreement contains the full and complete understanding between the
parties and supersedes all prior agreements and understandings
pertaining hereto and cannot be modified except by writing signed by
each party.

I hereby certify and represent that I am of legal age and have every right
to contract in my own name in connection with this Release, and that I
have read the foregoing and fully understand the meaning and effect
thereof, and intending to be legally bound I have signed this Authorization
this day of , 2010.

__________________
Print Name

__________________
Signature

__________________
Address

__________________
Date
Evaluation

Introduction

This particular assignment was quite simple to do. But with many video
projects there are always issue with planning and process the time
available to me, I usually found myself worrying about things I needed to
do and not doing them. I found myself having one idea then change it at
the last minute because I saw someone else’s that was much better.
Most of my skill was post production I found myself finding the paper
work exceptionally hard to finish. I believe that I put a full 100 percent of
effort in to this project. I believe that due to my organisation towards
filming my video I got out the best that I could have got.
I had a few ideas I wanted to film but one in particular made think to
myself that I could really pull it off and showing what i could do. I wanted
to work with stereo types. I wanted to the audience to think one thing
then see something completely different at the end of the video.

Visual quality

Colour-There was sometimes dull background lighting can make it harder

for people whom are visually challenged to see what is going on. I had to
go and do pick up shots to fix this problem
Lighting- The lighting was bright in some shot and dull in others. Because
of the time I realised this problem I could not change it

Sound quality

The sound quality on the film footage was not great. There was one very
important clip that I wanted to use but because the sound quality was
poor I could not use it. I wanted to get rid of any background noise that
would be heard so I used sound. I was thinking of doing one or two voice
over’s of the actors I used but i thought to myself that maybe it would be
too complicated. The background music was made using garage band by
me.
Distortion-Sometimes the footage looked distorted and sometimes it did
not. I was unable to hear what the characters were saying also at times
the sound was distorted so I used a voice over track
Low level-Because of the low level of talking by the people in the shots I
used sound track to overcome this problem. I could have used a sound
booster but I think the track I used worked well so I didn’t need to use
the sound track, I also could have not shot in open public places where
lots of people would be around talking and making lots of noise.
Aesthetic quality: -

Creativity- I used Special effects, transitions and titles to be more

creative in my video. After the first two minute into the film i realised that
too much creativity within the film, had the tendency sometimes, of being
too much and can become boring and distracting for the viewer.

Continuity-
It can be helpful seeing one scene after the other in the order so that the
viewing audience can understand what is going on, but if the scenes are
not in order it can confuse the viewer and lose their interest before it has
even started to get interesting because they don’t know what is going on.
This was I try to do with the scenes that i had film. I had to move around
shots to get the continuity right

Sequence/flow-
The scenes where not too long and where not too short so it worked well.
Using a certain amount of time for each shot the interest of the piece it
would have kept their interest.

Timing-
I made sure the shots were timed so they didn’t become long and boring,
I had to cutting down the scenes to help with the timing of the
soundtrack, I think that doing this made the video much better. This is
seen best in the beginning of the video when the first female actress is
leaning against the wall talking.
 FiLMoffice
FILM LIAISON AND MANAGEMENT
Representing the boroughs of Havering, Islington, Lambeth, Newham and Tower Hamlets

ASSESSMENT DATE ASSESSED BY

07/03/09 Omar loy

ACTIVITY LOCATION WHO’S AT RISK
Camera man
Actors
Filming in the bedroom
HAZARD Residual Residual CONTROL MEASURES
Risk Risk level*
potential for harm level* (AFTER) reducing the risk level to an acceptable level
(BEFORE)
Wires - The camera would be Medium Low Tape the wires down to the floor
plugged in the socket so
someone could trip over the
wires.

Tight Shot in a where we Medium Low Make a clear path way were there would
would walk between tables. be enough space to film
Involving a character –
collisions between character
and camera
Personal Protective Equipment Needed Provided By

None The group

Nearest 24 hour Hospital and/or Doctor
Nearest Telephone – Mobile Phones
Newham General

* REFER TO THE RISK ASSESSMENT SCORING GUIDELINES

 FiLMoffice
FILM LIAISON AND MANAGEMENT
Representing the boroughs of Havering, Islington, Lambeth, Newham and Tower Hamlets

ASSESSMENT DATE ASSESSED BY

07/03/09 Omar loy

ACTIVITY LOCATION WHO’S AT RISK
Camera man
Actors
Filming in the kitchen
HAZARD Residual Residual CONTROL MEASURES
Risk Risk level*
potential for harm level* (AFTER) reducing the risk level to an acceptable level
(BEFORE)
Wires - The camera would be Medium Low Tape the wires down to the floor
plugged in the socket so
someone could trip over the
wires.

Tight Shot in a where we Medium Low Make a clear path way were there would
would walk between tables. be enough space to film
Involving a character –
collisions between character
and camera
Personal Protective Equipment Needed Provided By

None The group

Nearest 24 hour Hospital and/or Doctor
Nearest Telephone – Mobile Phones
Newham General

* REFER TO THE RISK ASSESSMENT SCORING GUIDELINES