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SHOCK-ROCK ETHICS: A PENTADIC ANALYSIS
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Abstract
This essay explores the consistency of Manson’s philosophical schools of thought in his stated
three lists of everyday ethics, separately titled Drugs, Homosexuality, and Cheating. Using
pentadic criticism method, the three lists are charted using the pentad provided by Burke’s theory
of dramatism to determine the prevalence of act, agent, agency, scene, and purpose in the
artifact. Coding the artifact in this way reveals each list has its own set of controlling terms and
dominant ratios. The Drugs list reveals a list of drug addict qualities with agent as dominant term
and agent-act as the dominant ratio. The Homosexuality list reveals a list of gay qualifications
with agency as the common terminological ancestor and agency-act as the dominant ratio. The
Cheating list reveals a list on the do’s and don’ts of cheating with act as the dominant term and
act-purpose, act-agency, and act-scene as an equally shared dominant ratio. By applying the
corresponding philosophical schools of thought to the dominant ratio, three separate schools of
thought emerge. With regards to Manson’s perceived worldview, the Drugs list employs realism,
the Homosexuality list employs pragmatism, and the Cheating list employs realism as a guiding
school of thought. While some implications could be made from the comparison of differing
philosophical schools of thought, this article concludes additional research is necessary to reveal
why Manson inevitably chooses to apply three different philosophical schools of thought. In
addition, this study leaves behind a solid framework with which to begin understanding Marilyn
Manson’s worldview.
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People always want to know about my religious and philosophical beliefs. But few
people ever ask me about my everyday ethics– the rules I use when dealing with
Manson’s book, the long hard road out of hell, is comprised of 16 chapters utilizing
various writing forms throughout the autobiographical journey including narration, public
documents, magazine interviews, tour journals, photos, illustrations, and lists. Simply titled “the
rules”, Chapter 9 is comprised of three different lists separately titled Drugs, Homosexuality, and
Cheating. Manson (1998) uses four short sentences in the chapters to explain the subsequent lists
as his “everyday ethics–the rules I use when dealing with day-to-day society” (p.131). Spoken
directly to the reader, Manson (1998) also suggests posting the three lists on “your mother’s
refrigerator for easy reference” (p.131). Based on extensive music media analysis, Halnon
(2006) places Manson in a group of artists who, “break through the noise of commercial culture
by raising the transgression ante to the extreme and challenging nearly every conceivable social
rule governing taste, authority, morality, propriety, the sacred, and some might say civility itself”
(p.34). These three lists provide an unexpectedly candid window with which to view the
mysterious mind of a specific shock-rock artist and uniquely provide three different topics to
analysis and compare with regards to such an artist’s worldview. Additionally, “pentadic
criticism offers a set of conditions with a near-mathematical order, providing a way to compare
utilize this exemplary “representative anecdote” (Crable, 2000, p. 318) this study will attempt to
his three stated lists of everyday ethics. Applying pentadic criticism method to Manson’s three
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lists will demonstrate what type or types of philosophical school of thought the lead singer of a
further understanding of his actions and his work as an artist can occur. Additionally, examining
his rhetoric through pentadic analysis may provide further insight with regards the people who
strongly associate with Manson’s messages such as avid fans of his music.
This study will first review a brief history of pentadic criticism method and other
scholarly articles that reference Marilyn Manson, followed by the analysis of Manson’s three
stated lists of everyday ethics using pentadic criticism method. Finally, the results of the analysis
Literature Review
The first sections of this literature review will overview the history and method of
pentadic criticism. The second sections will provide a brief overview of scholarly studies using
Pentadic criticism method is based on Burke’s dramatistic theory (Foss, 2009, p. 355).
The theory explains that we live our lives as if they were themselves a play or drama. The
method applies this theory to rhetoric, relying on two basic assumptions and three necessary
conditions (Foss, 2009, p. 355). The first basic assumption is that language use constitutes
action, not motion. In this assumption, action is defined as “the ability of an organism to acquire
language or a symbol system” (Foss, 2009, p. 355). There are three necessary conditions for
action. The first condition is that action must involve freedom or choice. The second is action
requires purpose. The third is action requires motion because action cannot exist without motion
(Foss, 2009, p. 356). The second assumption of dramatism is that humans make messages as if
they were presenting a play. Humans “use rhetoric to constitute and present a particular view of
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the situation” (Foss, 2009, p. 355). As a result, rhetoric can be used to understand a person’s
363). Burke (1945) created a pentad using act, agency, agent, scene, and purpose as points to
code a person’s rhetoric (p. xv). Once an artifact is coded, a ratio will be found showing the
conducted applying Burke’s pentad method (Sealy-Morris, 2009; Crable, 2000; Kelley,
1987). The general findings of these studies showed Burke’s pentad and pentadic criticism
method provided an “adequate vocabulary for the study of motives” (Crable, 2000, 318),
could be utilized to analyze and compare specific rhetorical decisions in speech, written, and
worldview or philosophical school of thought. These studies are most helpful because they
work to strengthen the utility of Burke’s pentadic criticism method while also providing
Manson (Halnon, 2004, 2006; Gunn, 1999). While the methods of study varied from concert
fieldwork studies and extensive music media analysis to methods of sub-cultural identity
rhetorical analysis, the general findings of these studies sited ethnographic research as an
important means to understanding Manson in relation to his associated genre of music. These
studies also put Manson in a peers group of shock-rock musician and inferred connections
between Marilyn Manson as well as other shock-rock bands with the subcultures that support
the artists. These studies are helpful because they provide preliminary understanding of
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Manson from an outside perspective and provide a baseline for which to understand Manson.
These studies also work to suggest additional research of Manson’s rhetoric as well as
method will shed light on Manson’s personal worldview via his own rhetorical choices. The
results of this study will also provide some of the first rhetorical analysis focused on Manson in
particular and additionally focused on his worldview and not his connection to others.
Analysis
In the following analysis, “the rules” chapter format plays a large role in how Burke’s
Pentad is used in determining each of the list’s corresponding philosophical school of the
thought. While charting the pentad in each of the three lists, three subsequent sections appear.
Therefore, in the following analysis, the pentad is separately applied to the prelude, the list itself,
and the rules I’ve broken sections. Coding the artifact in this way reveals a direct connection
between the prelude and the list itself in determining the dominant term and ratios, with the rules
I’ve broken section acting as validation and further explanation of corresponding philosophical
school of thought. In attempt to provide a better understand how the method was applied to the
artifact, a brief overview of the chapter format precedes the pentad application summary and
findings.
Chapter Format
The three separate lists all share the same format. Each of the lists can be seen in their
entirety across a two page spread and appear directly one after the other. First a short
introduction from Manson’s point of view is used to prelude the list. Then “the rules” are listed
numerically and are mostly written in sentence fragments. Finally, a short section titled “Rules
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I’ve Broken” immediately follows each of the lists. These broken rules are admitted simply as
the violation of a specific numbered rule before the next broken rule number is listed. The third
scene: introducing guiding “everyday ethics” related to drug use and addiction
act: outline drugs and addiction in terms of others and to himself comparatively
“everyday ethics”
The prelude establishes Manson’s day-to-day drug-related ethics rely on the agent and the
decisions chosen by the agent. Manson refers to his “everyday ethics” as rules; however the
pentad reveals a list made up of “qualities” of an addict. These agent “qualities” describe a kind
of person to determine addiction, verifying agent as the dominant term. The list following the
prelude is then the supporting agencies, scenes, acts, and purposes of addict determinants. Also,
a difference between a drug user and a drug addict is established, with being a drug addict
perceived as negative. “It is the people who abuse drugs that make the people who use them look
bad,” and “…I have nothing but utter contempt for anyone who is addicted to drugs” (Manson,
1998, p. 132) express these differences. Manson therefore considers being an addict a negative in
his own life. The pentad coding includes Manson as part of the agent implying being an addict is
The numeric Drugs list reveals the dominant ratio and supports the common
To fully understand the connection between the prelude and the list, it is important to note the
final sentence of the prelude as “Consider yourself an addict if…” and the numeric list that
follow as a catalog of “rules” to complete that sentence. Each of the numbered “qualities” was
coded for pentad assignment and then paired with the agent terminological ancestor.
agent-act.
Agent-act was determined to be the dominant ratio after identifying seventeen of the
twenty-seven rules to be act. For example, rule number twenty-four states “[Consider yourself an
addict if…] you have your bodyguard watch the door when you go to the bathroom,” and
“[Consider yourself an addict if…] you actually pay for drugs” (Manson, 1998, p. 132). The
agent’s actions and choices are what most often determined the agent’s status as an addict.
agent-scene/ agent-agency.
The other ten “qualities” were identified mostly as either scene or agency. According to
Manson’s list, if “you live in New Orleans” or “you pay for groceries with rolled-up dollar bills”
(Manson, 1998, p. 132), the agent’s scene (New Orleans) or agency (rolled-up dollar bills) in that
The final Drugs list section labeled “Rules I’ve Broken” reveals Manson as an agent with
a varying conviction.
scene: after listing qualities of an addict; under the title Rules I’ve Broken
In the “Rules I’ve Broken” section, the agent (Manson) confesses which of the addict qualities
he’s had. By admitting to breaking his own “self-imposed” rules and not complying with his own
ethics, the pentad reveals an internal agent battle. If an act, agency, or scene is a result of the
agent’s drug addict status, then a factor about the agent must change for drug use to become drug
abuse. With the negative connotation assigned to drug abuse, the admitted rule breaking would
idealism.
corresponding philosophical school of thought can be recognized (Foss, 2009, p. 363). The
philosophical school of thought can then be used to further analyze the artifact and decipher
motive (Foss, 2009, p. 363). With agent identified as the dominant term, idealism corresponds
with the worldview proposed via the Drugs list. Idealism supposes reality is shaped or created by
people and people are the reason reality exists (Burke, 1945, p. 171). Under the Drugs list, the
agent ultimately determines if he or she is a drug addict. Idealism determines drug addiction as a
reality shaped by the agent. Companioned with the agent’s drug use, a negative state of being
would seemingly cause a shift in the agent’s reality where drug abuse could be validated.
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Therefore, using idealism as a guiding philosophical school of thought, Manson would describe
his shaping of reality as dynamic with his admitted drug use playing a larger role when paired
with a negative state of being. This explains how Manson can consider himself a drug user even
though he has broken rules and qualified as a drug addict. This would also mean Manson’s
“everyday ethics”
The prelude establishes Manson’s day-to-day homosexuality-related ethics rely on the agency of
an act, scene, agent, or purpose to qualify as gay. The pentad also reveals Manson’s
homosexuality rules are actually a list of gay qualifications. If these “qualifications” are what
makes (determines if) you are gay, agency is then verified as the dominant term. Statements such
as “I’m not against being gay–I just want to clarify what makes you gay,” and “…if you meet
any of the qualifications below, you are gay” (Manson, 1998, p. 134) exemplify Manson’s focus
on the means or how something is done as the gay determinant. The prelude also establishes the
list as only male-oriented, because “all women are by nature lesbians.” Even when considering
females, it is the agency (by nature) that determines the sexual orientation. The prelude’s final
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line seems to title the subsequent list as What Makes You Gay with the numeric list adding
The numeric Homosexuality list reveals the dominant ratio and supports the common
agency-act.
Agency-act was determined to be the dominant ratio after identifying twenty-three of the
thirty-nine rules to be act. For example, rule number thirty-seven states that “if you get choked
up listening to ‘Boys Don’t Cry’ by the Cure” (Manson, 1998, p. 135) you are gay. Here, the
agency (the song “Boys Don’t Cry”) determines if the act (getting choked up) qualifies the
person as gay. Similarly, rule number thirteen states “if you get a boner watching Gilligan’s
Island” (Manson, 1998, p. 134) you are gay. It is Gilligan’s Island as the means to the boner that
agency-scene.
Agency-scene was the second most frequent ratio, with eight out of thirty-nine.
According to Manson’s list, if “you’ve ever had a haircut while a Morrissey or Smith’s album
was playing in the room” (Manson, 1998, p. 135) you are gay. Once again, it is not until the
The Homosexuality list section labeled “Rules I’ve Broken” reveals Manson as an agent
scene: after listing gay qualifications; under the title Rules I’ve Broken
purpose: verify rules have been broken even though he’s not gay
In the “Rules I’ve Broken” section, the agent (Manson) admits to doing certain things in ways
that qualify him as gay. If Manson believes the agency determines homosexuality rather than
homosexuality being a quality of the agent, maintenance of his day-to-day homosexuality ethics
pragmatism.
Under the Homosexuality list, the agency determines is something is gay. With agency
identified as the dominant term, pragmatism corresponds as the worldview proposed via the
the means by which it was done, with a concern for function, operation, and application (Burke,
1945, p. 175). This philosophical school of thought explains why homosexuality is imposed as
an agency in the list of qualifications for being gay. Though not given a negative connotation,
Manson clearly states in the prelude that he is not gay. Using pragmatism as a guiding school of
thought also implies that homosexuality is a temperamental characteristic and confirms why
Manson can do gay things without being gay. Therefore, his admission to breaking some of his
own self-imposed homosexuality rules reveals Manson as a straight agent who sometimes fails to
act: outline cheating in terms of what does AND does not count as cheating
The prelude establishes Manson’s day-to-day cheating-related ethics rely on the act and whether
the act would or would not be considered cheating. In this list the act of rule breaking or rule
complying determines if cheating has occurred, verifying act as the dominant term of the
Cheating list. Also, “cheating” itself is an act. Manson seems to draw a focus on justifying his
own faithfulness, He states, “I can honestly say that I have never cheated on my girlfriend. And
that’s because I play by the rules” (Manson, 1998, p. 136). By saying he has never cheated on his
girlfriend, Manson directly excludes himself from the agent. It is important to note, the prelude
gives little information about what being a relationship means to Manson, except to say he has a
girlfriend. The prelude ends by labeling the subsequent numeric list “the rules Manson plays by”.
The numeric list confirms or denies if an act is or is not considered cheating by the agent in the
relationship.
The numeric Cheating list reveals the dominant ratio and supports the common
scene: various locations/times that justify whether an action is/is not cheating
be cheating
After applying the pentad to the Cheating list, a shared dominant ratio was revealed.
Purpose of the act, agency of the act, and scene of the act equally as often determined if cheating
had or had not occurred. Five out of sixteen of the rules were found for each of the three pentadic
terms. Rule number four, “Blow jobs don’t count–they’re like handshakes and autographs”
(Manson, 1998, p. 136) is an example of act-purpose. The act (blow job) is discredited because
In an example of act-agency, “if you cuddle, you’re cheating” (Manson, 1998, p. 136), it is how
the agency (a delicate form of embrace) determines the act (cuddling) to be cheating. Rule
number twelve, “if it’s someone’s birthday, it doesn’t count” (Manson, 1998, p. 137), is an
example of act-scene. In this example, the scene (someone’s birthday) determines the act (it)
doesn’t count.
The Cheating list section labeled “Rules I’ve Broken” reveals Manson as an agent able to
scene: after listing cheating rules; under the title Rules I’ve Broken
agency: disclosure
purpose: verify cheating rules (dos and don’ts) can be fully abided by
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In the “Rules I’ve Broken” section, the agent (Manson) admits to not breaking any of his
rules on cheating. This is plausible considering agent was not a part of the dominant
ratios found after applying the pentad. This implies that Manson bases relationship
infidelity on every other factor except for himself. This could also mean cheating has less
to do with remaining faithful and more to do with not breaking the rules imposed. The
list’s theme is one that doesn’t condone cheating but somehow still promotes sexual
promiscuity.
realism.
Under the Cheating list, the act (rule complying or rule breaking) is ultimately what
determines if the agent has cheated. With act identified as the dominant term, realism
corresponds as the worldview proposed via the Cheating list. Realism supposes a person is
defined by his or her actions and focuses on individual responsibility and the morality of an act
(Burke, 1945, p. 227). The Cheating list partially agrees with this philosophical school of
is important to note, Manson himself defined the Cheating list and under the realism framework
a person is defined by his or her actions (Burke, 1945, p. 227). If Manson is the one defining
what is and what is not cheating, his individual responsibility is somewhat restored by being the
determinant of an action’s morality or value in his life. There is also some conflict between the
consistency of morality supposed by realism and the list’s validation of certain sexual trespasses
normally considered cheating. Using realism as a guiding school of thought, Manson would
associate cheating with morality and is suggesting inconsistent cheating rules so as to maintain
Results
Applying the pentad to the Drug list established the section would outline drugs and
addiction in terms of the agent using anyone who is addicted to drugs as the controlling concept,
identifying agent as the common terminological ancestor. Further application of the pentad
revealed agent-act as the dominant ratio identifying idealism as the corresponding philosophical
school of thought. Idealism provided further implications towards Manson’s worldview such as
determining drug addiction as a reality shaped by the agent, with addiction as a controllable state
of being affected by agent’s existing drug use and level of negative life perception.
Pentad application to the Homosexuality list established the section would outline
homosexuality in terms of what qualifies or makes someone gay using what makes you gay as
the controlling concept, identifying agency as the common terminological ancestor. Additional
pentad application revealed agency-act as the dominant ratio, identifying the corresponding
Manson as a straight agent who sometimes fails to monitor his gay agencies.
Pentad coding of the Cheating list established the section would outline cheating in terms
of what does and does not count as cheating using action, reaction, and choices considered
cheating or not cheating as the controlling concept, identifying act as the common terminological
ancestor. Further application of the pentad revealed act-purpose, act-agency, and act-scene as
equally dominant ratios, recognizing realism as the corresponding school of thought. Realism
the cheating rules as a means to maintain his relationship credibility, with possible variations in
After comparing the three lists, three different philosophical schools of thought were
found to guide the construction of Manson’s everyday ethics. Burke’s pentad was successfully
able to reveal those differences. Additionally, these differences share significance because of
their topic specification. Burke’s pentadic criticism revealed Manson uses idealism to guide him
when dealing with drugs, pragmatism when concerned with homosexuality, and realism when
determining cheating. This finding can provide a solid base of comparison with which to analyze
cultural implications. Manson, as the lead singer of a controversial shock-rock band, is a public
figure. He has been the target of parents, school boards, and religious groups, just to name a few.
Many opponents of Manson have made extreme allegations as to the affects his music has had on
the youth of America. Additional research using rhetoric may provide a way to truly understand
what connects Manson to his fans, especially to determine if his rotating philosophical lens has
Applying Burke’s pentad to the three lists revealed additional research is necessary so as
to make stronger inferences from the findings of this study. Future critics should consider the
means by which Manson chooses to express himself. For example, Manson chooses to use many
different writing formats in the long hard road out of hell. Additional rhetorical criticism could
be applied to the rest of the book and compared using the findings of this study for preliminary
research and comparison. This approach did not reveal why Manson inevitably chose to use
different philosophical school of thought. Further inquiry may provide supplementary reasoning
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with regards to motive. In conclusion, this study leaves behind a solid framework with which to
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