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Course description In this course we will read, see, and listen to significant works about Venice. HUMA 3300 fulfills two important objectives in the Arts and Humanities curriculum. It is an introduction to the interdisciplinary nature of our program. And it meets the Advanced Writing Requirement of the University for the School. Professor Tim Redman Contact Information Office hours
My office is JO 5.102. My extension is 2775; the full phone number is 972 883-2775. My office hours are Wednesdays from 3:30-4:00pm and Saturdays from 12:30-1:00pm and by appointment. I am usually available after class as well. My e-mail address is HYPERLINK "mailto:redman@utdallas.edu" redman@utdallas.edu. The University has instituted a policy (see below) stating that instructors are not required to respond to e-mail coming from outside the Universitys own e-mail system. I do not fully agree with that policy (though I see its wisdom and its caution) and will strive to answer questions from any email source. However, be sure that your subject line contains HUMA 3300 at the outset. The best way to contact me is by e-mail; the worst is by leaving a message on my office phone.
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Student Learning Objectives/Outcomes From the requirements for Advanced Writing Students will be able to write in different ways to different audiences. This will be measured by two grades on each of two papers for the course, both stemming from Arts
and Performance. The rhetorical mode employed is persuasion. Students will be able to construct effective written arguments. This will be measured by two grades on each of two papers from the course, both stemming from Arts and Performance (the creative project). The rhetorical mode employed is persuasion. Each will be 600 words. First creative assignment: Write a proposal to do a creative project, designing, making, and wearing a costume coming from the subject matter of the course, in which you try to convince your audience, an imagined judge at a costume competition, that you have thought through this proposal, that it relates to the Venetian celebration of Carnevale, and have (or can find) the necessary skills to carry it out. Second creative assignment: After you do the creative project, write a review suitable for The Dallas Morning News persuading your audience to value your costume for Carnevale for its appropriateness to Venice and its skill in design and display. Consult with the instructor if you have doubts. You may get help in sewing or preparing your costume but the idea must be yours, based on the course subject. We have been asked to submit evaluations for this component of the writing requirement to the Associate Dean for Undergraduate Studies. Students will be able to write effectively using appropriate organization, mechanics, and style. This will be assessed for all six paper assignments see grades for form and content below -- but in particular for the two assignments for literary studies. Each will be 800 words plus bibliography. Students will be able to gather, incorporate, and interpret source material in their writing. This will be measured by two grades on each of two papers for the course, both stemming from Historical Studies. The classical rhetorical mode employed is exposition. Each will be 1,000 words plus bibliography. From objectives for Arts and Humanities Students will understand the interdisciplinary nature of the School of Arts and Humanities. This will be measured by the quizzes. Students will understand significant moments in Venetian literature, art, music, and history. This also will be measured by the quizzes. Required Textbooks and Materials Patricia Fortini Brown (B), Art and Life in Renaissance Venice (Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice Hall, 1997) 9 780131 937 864 pb. Thomas Mann (M), Death in Venice translated and edited by Clayton Kolb (New York: Norton, 1994) 9 780393 960136 pb. Friederich Nietzsche (Ni), The Birth of Tragedy (New York: Penguin, 1993) 978 0 140 433395 pb. John Julius Norwich (No), A History of Venice (New York: Vintage, 1989) 0 679 721975 pb. Shakespeare (S), The Merchant of Venice (London: The Arden Shakespeare, Thomson Learning, 2005) 9781 903436 03 5 pb.
Vivaldi (V), The Four Seasons (cd or download) any edition. A computer with Word and internet access. A good college writing handbook (I like Harbrace). A good college dictionary. Student Responsibility for Texts
The Campus Bookstore and Off-Campus Books have both been given book orders. Regrettably though understandably they frequently order too few books for the class size. The situation has come about because students use other sources to order their books, often going to the internet. The bookstore was out is not an excuse for not being prepared for class. Students are required to have access to required textbooks prior to the second day of class.
Course calendar Saturday, August 27: Course introduction. Student introductions. Quiz #1.
Saturday, September 3: No xi-48. B 6-18. Quiz #2. Saturday, September 10: I may have to go to St. Louis for a conference. The work will be made up. I suggest you use this extra time to start to read S The Merchant of Venice and to start to work on your first literary studies paper. It will be as follows. Define tragedy. Define comedy. Use the standard definition of tragedy found in Aristotles Poetics or derived from it. Use a standard definition of comedy from a dictionary. Cite your sources. Argue whether or not Merchant of Venice is a tragedy or a comedy. This is not a research paper. You can do this paper successfully based only on your own close reading of the play. If you choose to use outside sources you must cite them to avoid serious consequences for plagiarism. The paper is primarily meant to be on your own reaction to the play but one that uses evidence from the text to support your reading. Saturday, September 17: No 49-107. B 19-38. S Merchant Acts I and II. Quiz #3. Saturday, September 24: No 108-163. B 39-51. S Merchant Acts III, IV, and V. Quiz #4. Saturday, October 1: No 164-213. B 52-64. Start film Merchant. Literary paper #1 due. Quiz #5. Assign creative paper #1 (creative project proposal) see earlier in the syllabus. The creative projects must relate to Venice. Saturday, October 8: No 214-278. B 65-79. Finish film Merchant. Quiz #6. Return literary paper #1. Assign historical paper #1. The Venetians spent a great deal of time and effort over the centuries to attempt to limit the powers of the doge. Why did they do so? How did they do so? This paper is a research paper. You should rely on Norwich but also search the internet and the library for answers to these questions. You must cite all sources, including material which you paraphrased, in the bibliography. Saturday, October 15: No 279-333. B 80-90. M Death in Venice. Quiz #7. Creative project paper #1 due. Assign literary paper #2. Define Apollonian and Dionysian. How do these two forces conflict in the protagonist of Death in Venice? Pay attention to the conversations between Mahler and his musician friend in the film version of the novella. This is not a research paper (see literary paper assignment #1). Saturday, October 22: No 334-382. B 91-108. Ni vii-64. Quiz #8. Start listening to Vivaldi. The quiz questions on Vivaldi will consist of my playing a part of The Four Seasons and your identifying what its a bout. Historical paper #1 due. Saturday, October 29: No 383-433. B 109-116. Ni 64-117. Quiz #9. Continue listening to Vivaldi. Wear your costume. Be prepared to say something about it to the class. Assign historical paper #2. Give some reasons for the decline of the Venetian Republic. This is a research paper. Rely on Norwich but use other sources and
attach a bibliography. Saturday, November 5: No 434-488. B 117-133. Begin watching Viscontis Death in Venice. Quiz #10. Vivaldi. Creative project paper #2 due. Saturday, November 12: No 489-541. B 134-142 Quiz #11. Vivaldi. Finish watching Viscontis Death in Venice. Saturday, November 19: No class. Ill be at a conference. Work on literary paper #2. Listen to Vivaldi. Saturday, November 26: No 542-604. B 143-153. Quiz #12 (including Vivaldi questions). Literary paper #2 due. Saturday, December 3: No 605-642. B 154-167. Quiz #13 (including Vivaldi questions). Historical paper #3 due. . Saturday, December 10: Exam day. There is no final exam in this class, but we will hold class and possibly have a Quiz #14.
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Note: It is all right to have a friend proofread your paper for typos or errors in form, but ultimately only you are responsible for what you write. Form You are expected to have mastered, by now, the conventions of English usage, spelling, and grammar. If you do not already own them, you must purchase a handbook of grammar and usage, and a dictionary. Points are taken off of your papers for errors in form. In particular, papers are heavily penalized for errors in sentence structure and punctuation. The Sentence
Style begins at the sentence level. There are four correct types of English sentences: simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex. You need to master these types and how they are punctuated. The rules are not difficult. You need to be able to differentiate between a phrase (a related group of words) and a clause (a related group of words with a subject-verb core). You need to be able to distinguish between a main (or independent) clause and a subordinate (or dependent) clause. There are three major sentence errors: fragment, comma splice, and run-on. A fragment is punctuated as a sentence, but lacks a subject-verb core, or it is a subordinate clause standing alone as a sentence. Although fragments are sometimes used for emphasis in English prose, it is not suggested that you do so. A comma splice is the incorrect attempt to hook together two main clauses with only a comma. A run-on is a sentence that has gone beyond its boundaries, too many clauses trying to make up one sentence instead of being broken up into two or more sentences. The Paragraph Rhetoric begins at the paragraph level. A paragraph is used to develop one idea. It normally contains a thesis sentence that gives the idea. The thesis sentence is usually either the first or last sentence of the paragraph.
Content Grading guidelines for content (from Garrison, How a Writer Works, and CCCC) The "A" Paper Conveys immediately a sense of person behind the words; an individual voice speaks firmly and clearly from the page. Contains a significant and central idea clearly defined and supported with concrete, substantial, and consistently relevant detail. The essay is packed with information, and detail has a "just right" feel to it. Displays freshness and originality of perception; moves through its ideas with an inevitability organic to its central idea. Engages attention and interest at the beginning, progresses by ordered and necessary stages, and ends with a conclusion that summarizes the essay without being repetitive. Development is economical, original, well proportioned, and emphatic. The "B" Paper Possesses many of the same features of the "A" paper, but the style, originality, and level of excellence is less exceptional. Information may be thin. Examples or illustrations may feel slightly forced or exaggerated. Organization is clear; the reader does not confuse the sequence of information or ideas. However, transitions may be somewhat awkward, abrupt, mechanical, or monotonous. The "C" Paper Characterized by awkwardness throughout. It does not read smoothly aloud. The central idea is apparent but too general, too familiar, or too limited. It is supported with concrete detail, though that detail may be occasionally repetitious, irrelevant, or sketchy. The essay gives the reader an impression of fuzziness and lack of assurance on the part of the writer. Organization is sometimes confused, especially between sentences. The reader sometimes has to stop
and reread material to be sure of its meaning. The "D" Paper The main impression is one of haste, carelessness, lack of attention or simply an inability to draft even direct or simple statements. The central idea is missing, confused, superficial, or unsupported by concrete or relevant detail. Content is obvious, contradictory, or aimless. The essay has no clear and orderly stages and fails to emphasize and support the central ideal. Paragraphs are typographical rather than structural; transitions between paragraphs are missing, unclear, ineffective or rudimentary. The essay may make some sense, but only if the reader struggles to find it. The writer has scanty control of the material.
Academic Integrity
The faculty expects from its students a high level of responsibility and academic honesty. Because the value of an academic degree depends upon the absolute integrity of the work done by the student for that degree, it is imperative that a student demonstrate a high standard of individual honor in his or her scholastic work. Scholastic dishonesty includes, but is not limited to, statements, acts or omissions related to applications for enrollment or the award of a degree, and/or the submission as ones own work or material that is not ones own. As a general rule, scholastic dishonesty involves one of the following acts: cheating, plagiarism, collusion and/or falsifying academic records. Students suspected of academic dishonesty are subject to disciplinary proceedings. Plagiarism, especially from the web, from portions of papers for other classes, and from any other source is unacceptable and will be dealt with under the universitys policy on plagiarism (see general catalog for details). This course will use the resources of turnitin.com, which searches the web for possible plagiarism and is over 90% effective.
Plagiarism
You may get help revising or proofreading your papers from friends or family, fellow students, or writing tutors. However, the principal work on your paper must be yours. Plagiarism is the presentation of another person's work as your own, whether you mean to or not. Copying or paraphrasing passages from another writer's work without acknowledging what you've done is plagiarism. Allowing another writer to write any significant portion of your essay is plagiarism. Plagiarism is a serious offense in academia and can result in failure for the paper or failure for the course or worse.
Conduct
In the 18th century the French defined liberty as the freedom to do anything that doesn't hurt other people. Behavior that distracts others or disrupts the learning environment, such as talking or tardiness, hurts other people and won't be tolerated. Cell phones and pagers must be turned off. Penalties for infractions are entirely at the discretion of the instructor.
Disability Services
The goal of Disability Services is to provide students with disabilities educational opportunities equal to those of their non-disabled peers. Disability Services is located in room 1.610 in the Student Union. Office hours are Monday and Thursday, 8:30 a.m. to 6:30 p.m.; Tuesday and Wednesday, 8:30 a.m. to 7:30 p.m.; and Friday, 8:30 a.m. to 5:30 p.m. The contact information for the Office of Disability Services is: The University of Texas at Dallas, SU 22 PO Box 830688 Richardson, Texas 75083-0688 (972) 883-2098 (voice or TTY) Essentially, the law requires that colleges and universities make those reasonable adjustments necessary to eliminate discrimination on the basis of disability. For example, it may be necessary to remove classroom prohibitions against tape recorders or animals (in the case of dog guides) for students who are blind. Occasionally an assignment requirement may be substituted (for example, a research paper versus an oral presentation for a student who is hearing impaired). Classes enrolled students with mobility impairments may have to be rescheduled in accessible facilities. The college or university may need to provide special
services such as registration, note-taking, or mobility assistance. It is the students responsibility to notify his or her professors of the need for such an accommodation. Disability Services provides students with letters to present to faculty members to verify that the student has a disability and needs accommodations. Individuals requiring special accommodation should contact the professor after class or during office hours.
These descriptions and timelines are subject to change at the discretion of the Professor.
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