Name _________________ Homebase ________________ City ____________________

Relocation Guide
Self and Formative Assessment Population and Resources
Relocation Guide (Performance Assessment)
Exemplary (100%)
Thorough and accurate explanation of the population demographics in your city today. You clearly articulate and fully detail why people would choose to live in your city, both in the past and the present.

Proficient (88%)
You provide an accurate explanation of the population demographics in your city today and accurately explain why people have chosen to live there.

Developing (76%)
You provide some explanation of the population demographics in your city today and explain why people have chosen to live there, but some information is unclear or incomplete.

Emerging (64%)
You provide very limited information about the people who live in your city or why they have chosen to live there. We are left with many questions.

M.SS3.2 describe and compare the human characteristics of a place M.SS3.4 explain and give examples of the voluntary and involuntary movement of people
Why did/do people move to your city? Who lives in your city today? Student:

If I were turning this in right now, I would probably earn _______. I think this because: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __ My favorite part about my article is: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __ I would like to do the following before I make this a part of my Relocation Guide: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __

Teacher: If you were turning this in right now, you would probably earn _______. This score WILL appear in power school but WILL NOT count towards your grade. Please work to improve the content of the following before it becomes a part of your Relocation Guide: ContextWhen, why and by whom was your city was founded? Where it is located (water)?

 Cause--Why would people want to move to your city today? What resources or
opportunities does your city have for its people?

Effect--Who lives in your city today? Nationalities? Religions? Other population data?

Relocation Guide (Performance Assessment)

E4.1 develop main ideas and supporting details on a topic, story, or idea in a paragraph format How do I develop and structure my writing?

Exemplary (100%)

Proficient (88%)

Developing (76%)

Emerging (64%)

You have done an excellent job throughout your guide of stating main ideas and supporting those main ideas with supporting details. Your hamburger paragraph format is strong. Your skillful use of stylistic devices creates an accurate picture of what your city is really like. Impressive! You have masterfully shown how you feel about your city. Your personality shines through your writing and you are exceptionally persuasive.

Your main ideas are developed and have strong details to support them. The hamburger paragraph format is evident in your writing.

Your main idea could be further developed. Some details do not support the main ideas. Pieces of your hamburger may be missing!

Main ideas are unclear and details should be stronger. Your hamburger has fallen apart.

E3.2 write sentences that use stylistic devices appropriate to the genre and purpose of the piece E 4.2 begin to create a voice as a writer that identifies a piece of writing as theirs

You use some stylistic devices that add color to your writing. Your writing is quite persuasive and individuality is shown.

You took the risk to try to add stylistic devices but some could be stronger. You attempt to be persuasive and show some personality in your writing, but more could be done to show your individuality.

You show little attempt at using stylistic devices. Your opinion about your city is unclear, and there is little in your writing to make it stand out as yours.

In English Student: If I were turning this in right now, I would probably earn _______. I think this because: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __

I think the best part about this piece of writing is: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __ I would like to do the following before I make this a part of my Relocation Guide: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __ Teacher: If you were turning this in right now, you would probably earn _______. This score WILL appear in power school but WILL NOT count towards your grade. I would suggest that you work on the following before you make this article a part of your Relocation Guide: Main ideas Supporting details Hamburger structure Stylistic Devices--vivid words, simile, metaphor Voice-personality, feelings, individuality