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Teknikmenjawabbahasainggeris pmrsmkpb30102010moteldesa Essay writing

Vital guidelines: 1. 2. 3. 4. Identify the task and its requirements: Write accurate sentences Meaning must be established Write varied sentence structuresSimple and compound sentences are compulsory; you should also be able to write complex sentences. Organise your ideas well- paragraphing. Use linkers- Sequence and logical connectors.

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How to score well? You must fully fulfil all the task and the requirements of the questions ( Guided composition, Summary, Novel)

(A) Guided Composition/ Essay 1. What to write?- Informal letter, speech/talk, report, article, story. .......... Always REMEMBER the FORMAT 2. How to write? - Paragraph 1: introduction- tell your reader why are you writing the essay should be brief and interesting - Paragraphs 2,...,...,.... are for you to mention all the points given and elaborate on each of the points - Last paragraph conclusion- for you to conclude/end your piece of writing should be brief and effective. ........FORMAT.....POINTS GIVEN.......ELABORATIONS

Examples: You are the President of the Peer Counselling Club of your school. You have been asked to give a talk during your school assembly. The title is stress Among Students. Based on the notes given below. Write out your talk.

What causes stress? Fighting Loneliness Examination Family problems How to cope with stress? Have regular family outings Keep yourself busy with games Prepare early for your examination Talk to your counsellor about your problems.

Talk; Good morning to the principal, teachers and all my friends. I am here on this fine morning to deliver a talk entitled stress among students. I am siti zulaikha binti marzuki from 3 arif and i find that many students are having stress. There are many causes of stress. First, fighting. Some students normally fight with their friends because of misunderstanding. This will affect their emotions and this will cause them to lose concentration on their studies. Second, loneliness. This is because they have no friend. Whenever they are lonely they feel sad because they cannot share their problems, feelings and secret. This disturbs their minds. Besides, family problems like broken families and financial problems also contribute to stress. They

cannot possess what they want so they get upset and this leads to stress. Then, examinations is another factor that has caused stress. They have to study even until midnight. They also have to burn their midnight oil and study up to the eleventh hour. They lack sleep and rest so they will be tired, sleepy and their health will be affected. So my fellow students, there are ways to get rid Of the problem. First, have regular family outings. We can share our happiness and sadness with our family members. Other than that, keep yourself busy with games such as playing football and netball because when you play games you relieve tension. Also, talk to your counsellor about your problem in order to get good advice for they are professional. Last but not least, you must prepare early for examination . This is important because you will be well-prepared which helps you to pass with flying colours.

In the nutshell, I hope friends who are stressed will know how to cope with it and will lead a better and happier live. Lastly, i would like to thank all of you for lending me your ears.

With the help of the pictures and notes below. Write an article for your school English newsletter. Your article entitled, How to be a Successful Sportsman. Make your article as interesting as possible.

Today, many people want to be successful sportsmen but how many are willing to really work hard and strive to achieve victory. Therefore, we must know all

the tips, techniques and we must possess a very high skills and determination. There are many factors that contribute to the success. One way is by having balanced-meals that contain all the nutrients that are needed by our body such as carbohydrates and protein. These food nutrients are important because they make our body healthy. Next, we must eat a lot of vegetables for they supply us vitamins that are good to prevent dangerous diseases. We should also take ample nutritious food because to play sports we must be fit and energetic.

Balanced meals More vegetables Nutritious food

Enough sleep and rest 8 hours Relax after training

Regular training Practice Discipline

A good coach Skill Strategy

How to be a successful sportsman Written by: Ali bin Abu

There are many ways on how to be a successful sportsman. It is not difficult to be an athlete when we do it the right way. What important is, we must be determined. First, we must eat balanced meals because they contain all the necessary nutrients needed by our body. Take more vegetables in our daily diet since they supply us with multivitamins that prevent us

from contracting dangerous diseases. We should also eat nutritious food. This is important to have a healthy body and strong mind. Second, have enough sleep and rest to obtain adequate/ sufficient energy. Good and quality sleeps will help our body and minds to rejuvenate. We should sleep eight hours per day. This will make our body to recover. Besides, we should also relax after training to allow our muscles to rest and to regain energy. Therefore, to be a good sportsman we must do regular training as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. A good self-discipline is very much needed because it ensures success. Undergoing practices everyday for 2-3 hours will help you gain perfectness in the sports you play. A good coach is compulsory to train, guide and motivate you so that you will be an excellent athlete. You need to have many skills in playing sports in order to play well against your opponents. Good strategies help you to win and to achieve your goals.

To sum up, I would like to emphasise that to be a successful sportsman is not impossible. We can always strive to achieve our vision for no pain no gain and no venture no gain.

123, lorong merpati, Taman gagak 21000 kuala gula Negeri aman.

30 september 2010-09-30

Dear cousin/ nisah/ tipah/ mat/ wahab, How are you? I hope you are as fit as a fiddle/ are in the pink. I write this letter to share my story with you about my experiences when i spent a week at an island resort. I went to pulau pangkor in perak during last school holidays for a vacation. The island was beautiful with its golden beach.therefore, I had a wonderful picnic under a shady casuarina tree. Then I had a sumptuous lunch. The sea water was blue It was cooling and refreshing. The crystal-clear water was so tempting that i could not resist so i dived into it. I collected unique and beautiful seashells. I would make them as my collection. I intended to turn them as the decorative items. I saw many colourful corals . They were very attractive and became sight of the sore

eye. Unfortunately. I could not take because people are prohibited to take them away. I went on an island tour by riding a speed boat to enjoy the natural and wonderful beauty. I felt very excited looking at the picturesque scene. I was amazed with the Gods creation. My father cooked seafood such as lobsters and squids. They were very appetizing. We had a barbeque at night. It was a full moon and thousands stars glimmering in the bright sky. It was indeed a pleasant spot to relax for you can enjoy anytime siesta/ take a nap/ take forty winks here I hope to go on another superb holiday with my family. I have a lot more to tell but i have pen off now because i have homework to do. Till the next time, hasta manana! Your loving cousin

Why novel/ short stories/ poems

For examination to test your understanding of the literary works

Read, understand to answer questions well.

You are to provide evidence. In the novel potato people written by angela wright, the character that i like most is p... f.. (1) You are going to /ake a statement. Do you like Patrick flynne? Yes, i like Patrick flynne because he is kind and brave.

(2) Give evidenve Patrick is kind because he gives his food to marie. When he is walking to the port of cork he meets a young lady named marie who is hungry. They stop at the roadside and knowing that marie is hungry, Patrick offers her some bread. He also buys her a ticket to go to America because marie has no money Patrick is also brave because he is brave enough to leave his village, skullgoragh alone to go to port of cork in order to sail to America. He has to face and go through a lot of difficulties and challenges on the way there. He has no money and food. He also has to travel a long and hard journey. Above is the evidence to show that Patrick is kind and brave.

(3) Give the details of the evidence.

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