Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Introduction
Reject MajorRevision MinorRevision Accept No Yes Yes Yes Errorsindata(compared Minordataerrors Missing;poorly Allcomponents withtext,tables,figures); (roundingerrors; written; present; minormismatchwith Poorlywritten(incomplete Contentdoesnt Dataareaccurate text/tables/figures); sentences,needsmajor matchtext; andmatchtext; rewritingforsenseand Componentspresent Stated Wellwritten, butmayneedminor flow); objective/methods/ concise,clear writingforreadability results/conclusions Components(objective/ Subjectmatteris missingor methods/results/conclusion Subjectmatteris original, incomprehensible s)missingorunclear originalandimportant pressworthy,of Subjectmatterisnot Subjectmatterisof majorgeneral fresh,new;content interest specializedormoderate isnotoriginal; interest,orofmajorinterest materialisof onlyifpaperissubstantially marginalgeneral revised interest Needsmajorrewritingfor Wellwritten, Missing;poorly Minordataerrors senseandflow;dataerrors concise; written(would (e.g.,roundingerrors); (datadodontmatch requiremajor Hypothesisand Minorrewriting; rewritingforsense; text/tables/figures; purposeofstudyare hypothesisisclearly clearlyandconcisely Noclearstatement presentedandis Hypothesisandobjective presented ofwhystudywas supportedbytext notclearlystated; performed); Dataareaccurate; Referencesare Inadequatereferences(but Hypothesismissing, hypothesesare adequate couldbefixedvialitreview) weak,orunclear; correctlypresented IRB/HIPAA documentation missing andfullysupported Introtextdoesnt bytext match/supportbody text; Currentreferences thatwillbeof Multipledataerrors
interesttoreaders
Materialsand Methods
Unfixableflawsin data/research (number/selection ofsubjects; instruments/drugs used; blinded/unblinded; independentvs consensusreadings) Descriptionof proceduresmissing orsounclearthat otherscouldnt reproducestudy, withlittlelikelihood thatdeficitcouldbe fixed; IRB/HIPAA compliance statementsmissing Questionabledata
Flawsindataand/or numerous errors/mismatchesindata thatpotentiallycanbefixed; Poorlywritten(incomplete sentences,needsmajor rewritingforsenseand flow); grammar/punctuation/ spellingerrorsthatdetract fromreadability; Descriptionofprocedures unclear;wouldbedifficult forotherstoreproduce studybyreadingarticle, althoughwithmajor rewriting,deficitcouldbe remedied Tables/figuresneedmajor work
Minordataerrorsthat areeasilyfixed Adequatelywritten, althoughwritingcould bepolished;minor typos/grammar/ punctuationerrors Descriptionof proceduresneeds minorclarification (clearlyremediable) Toomany/toofew figures/tables(easily remediable)
Dataareaccurate Allresearch componentsare present,clearly stated Proceduresare clear,concise,and easilyreplicable; articleadvances knowledge Allcompliance guidelinesaremet Tables/figures contribute substantiallyto content
Results
and/ormajorerrors indata/statistical methods; Nonewinformation isimparted;poorly written/hardto understand; Inadequate/missing figures/tables Multiplegrammar/ punctuation/spelling errorsandlanguage grasp Missingor completely unsupportiveof itemsmentionedin Materialsand Methods Doesnotanswerthe researchquestion Notcredible Statistical significanceof findingsnotstated Repetitiveofdata alreadycovered
inconsistent with all available data in the literature (possibility of false data)
Supportof hypothesis/research question/itemsmentioned inMaterialsandMethods unclear,butkey componentsarepresentand majorrewritingcanaddress lackofclarity Credible,butpoorly presented;canbemade acceptableifrewritten Repetitive,butcanbe revised
Minorrewriting neededtosupportall itemsmentionedin Materialsand methods Credible Minorrepetitionof dataalreadyincluded intables/othertext, butrewritingcan addressthis
Logicallypresented Summarizes important observations Statesstatistical significanceof findings Credible;answers research question/hypothesis Wellwritten
Discussion
References
Unqualified statementsand conclusionsare madethatarenot supportedbythe data;conclusions andgoalsnotlinked Studyimplications and/orlimitations notincluded Relevantstudiesnot mentioned Doesntemphasize howstudyadvances knowledgeorstudy doesnotadvance knowledge Misnumbered;list doesntmatchtext Toomanyortoofew (seemanuscript typeguidelines) Outofdate Glaringomissions (clearly,authorsdid notreviewother importantarticles) Failuretoadhereto AMAcitationstyle
Statements,goals,and conclusionsarenotlinked andarenotclearly supportedbydata;major rewritingcouldaddressthis Somestudyimplications and/orlimitationsare missingornotclearly presented Studyhasthepotentialto advanceknowledgeifpaper isrewrittenandkey componentsclearly presented
Statementsand conclusionsare presentedbutneed minorrevisionto correlatewithdata andlinkwithgoals Studyimplications and/orlimitationsare presentedbutare missingapoint(s), whichcanbe addressed Studyadvances knowledge
Statementsand conclusionsare clearlysupportedby dataandarelinked togoals Studyclearly advancesknowledge Studysimplications andlimitationsare completelyand succinctlypresented
Toomanyortoofew,but authorscanaddress Somerefsareoutofdate andimportantrefsare missing,butauthorscanfix vialitsearch;authorsdid makesomeeffortto researchotherimportant articles Notwellcorrelatedwithtext PoorlypreparedreAMA citationstyle
Minor adding/trimming neededinreflist,but listiscurrentand appropriatetoarticle type Listmissingan importantarticle(s); easilyaddressedby authors Needsminorworkto correlatelistwithtext AdherestoAMA citationstyle
Tables
Figures
Duplicative/too many/toofew Unnecessary; repeatsmaterialin text Unclear;datadonot correlate with/supporttext Toomany/toofew Notcitedintext Duplicative Poorqualityimages Dontaddto discussion/support goals Missingarrows,etc., onimages;arrows arenotcitedin legends;acronyms notspelledoutin legends Majordiscrepancies withintext,abstract, tables; suspicious/poorly prepared/insufficien t/outdateddata offeringno possibilityof revision;dataare
Minorrevisions neededtocorrelate datawithtext Atablecouldbe added/removed Tablessupportand augmenttext Figuresareacceptable qualityandsupport text/discussion/ hypothesis Minorrevisions neededremissing arrows,etc.
Data
Toomany/toofew(but couldbeaddressedby authors) Correlationto/supportof text/discussion/hypothesisis weak;mustbestrengthened Someimagesarepoor quality;betterimagesmust besubstituted Someproblemswithmissing arrows/arrowsnotcitedin legends,buttopicis importantandartcouldbe fixed Discrepancieswithintext, abstract,tables(e.g.,100 patientsmentionedin abstractand110intext); matherrorsin addition/subtraction/divisio n/mult/equationprep; reviewerbelievesthaterrors canbecorrected
Writingstyle
Research
similarto/repeat informationfrom priorarticles Poor;often incomprehensible; multiple spelling/grammar/ punctuationerrors; doesntadhereto manuscripttype format Difficulttofollow Insufficient(not fixable)research; Hypothesisnot definedoranswered