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CONFESSION We hereby confess that this work is our original work except the pieces and summary which each and every one had been explain the sources.

1) Signature Name Date

: : MohdAdibAzfar bin Muri :

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: : Mohammad Lutfi bin MohdAnor :

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Content Coursework Question Declaration Form Table of Content Articles & Graphic Organizer Critical Review Reflection References Appendices Collaboration Form

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A sweet stop to stomach bugs

Main ideas

Raspberry and balckcurrent juice cordials are capable of killing at least 12 different types of nasty bacteria. Responsible for stomach upset.

A cordial with at least 35 percent raspberry or blackcurrent juice will fight bacteria, even when dilated down to one part cordial in ten parts water.

Macaroni

Marjoram

Dregano

Parmesan cheese

Fontina cheese

Taleggio cheese

Mascarpone cheese Macaroni cheese Vocabulary Nutmey

Mozzarella cheese

Bechamels

Claggy

Colounder

Gooey

As a teenager, I have a facebook account.

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determiner pronoun article Noun verb

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That is how teenager ruin their lives.

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So it becomes compulsory for student to have a facebook account

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adjective

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article adjective

noun

preposition

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I prefer manual instruction from lectures.

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verb

noun

preposition noun

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It is better to get information this way, rather than via facebook.

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CRITICAL REVIEW This part of the assignment is to critically review all the three articles selected. For the purpose of organization, each article shall respectively be reviewed in the next paragraph; Article one in the next paragraph, article two in the third paragraph followed by article three. Article one is entitled A Sweet Stop to Stomach Bugs. This article is about the benefit of blackcurrants and raspberries juice to cure stomachache. This article is giving us lots of information on the bacteria that make our stomach upset and educate the readers on the way to prevent it. This article is also really enjoyable to read because the writer wrote it using words that are understandable by everyone even though they lack the English vocabulary. Some people on the earth hate to read facts but when we read this article, it makes me eager to know facts on this topic. The second article is entitled Macaroni Cheese. This article is about method to preparing macaroni cheese. According to the writer, this dish is an old-school frumpy Anglicized dish. Four types of cheeses are used to prepare this dish. This article is interesting. The language used to instruct readers is easy to understand. Besides, the writer manages to make me interested to try out this menu. Moreover, pictures are included in this article and make me wonder about the delightful taste of the dish. In addition, the writer also included the amount of ingredients that are used to prepare this dish for serving it to between 4-6 people. The last article is entitled Students Forced to Have FB Account. This article is about unsatisfied college student due to lectures forcing students to have facebook account for class note update, class cancellation and other class activities. The writer prefers to have manual instructions from lectures. This article is a good example on the way to write a complain. This is because we can rationalize all the points that she gives. Moreover, I like the way she criticized the nowadays problems that are related on teenagers addicted to social networking sites.

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In a nut shell, writers of any articles are playing a big role to attract people to read their articles. If they present it interestingly, people will have no doubt to read their articles repeatedly. Moreover, if we wrote an article on complaining about something, we must rationalize all the unsatisfactory ideas. Besides, recipes writing also can be boring and the dish could taste worst if the writer failed to convince people on the dish.

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MOHD ADIB AZFAR BIN MURI

ALHAMDULILLAH, praise to Allah as He gave me strength to finish up my task completely. This time i learn how to write a critical review. I know even though I have done it several times before, but still I cannot did it properly. I do not know how to write proper criticize writing like it should be done. I did search on how to write a critical review on internet, and I found lots of them. There are so many tip that I can follow in order to write a good criticize essay. Besides, I do refer with other classmate on this task. They help me a lot in doing this task. While finishing this task, I realize that I have improve a bit in doing graphic organizer compared to the last other task. Now, I know how a good graphic organizer looks like. There must be introduction, body and conclusion in there. If before this I easily got confuse in doing this, now I know how to start and finish it in orderly way. So, I think thats all I need to share with all of you for this task. I hope my criticize essay writing will fulfill all the criteria and format required.

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Reflection Assalamualaikum. My names is Mohammad Lutfi Bin Mohd Anor, would like to share our sweet experience finishing this assignment. Firstly, thanks to Ilahi with His bless and grace, I am able of finishing my coursework After I finished up this assignment, I got many valuable experiences. For doing this assignment, it makes I know how to produce a critical review.

Besides that, with the graphic organizer its give us the best ways on how to produce a criticize essay. Before this, I expect do the graphic organizer is a hard but during to do that using point that we gain from the article, that can solve the problem and make us easy to produce critical review.

I also happy because my friend did not stingy to share their idea to finish the assignment.

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Refrences
Azar, B. (2003). Fundamentals Of English Grammar. United States: Longman. Lau, D. (2011). A Sweet Stop To Stomach Bugs. Kuala Lumpur: Reader's Digest Asi Pte. Ltd. Oliver, J. (2008, October 1). Jamie's Great Britain. Retrieved February 19, 2012, from JamieOliver.com: http://www.jamieoliver.com/recipes/pasta-recipes/macaroni-cheese Techinamoorthy, U. (2012, February 17). Student Forced To Have FB Account. New Straits Times, p. 26. University of New South Wales. (2005). Academics Skill Resources. Retrieved February 19, 2012, from Writing a Critical Review: http://www.lc.unsw.edu.au/onlib/critrev.html

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