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We expect all our employees to follow these guidelines – it is very important to us.
Yes, there’s nothing wrong with putting aside a pitch letter or press release, going out to
lunch or sleeping on it, and then going back and make it even better.
There are two parts to writing: the technical part (spelling, punctuation, accuracy,
choice of words, editing) and the strategic part (what you say in what order, how you
grab your reader, making “the sell” convincing). You have to do both of them well to
succeed as a publicist.
TECHNICAL PART
What you write is a reflection of you and this company – to the media and to our clients.
Every little thing you write does count.
• Get to the point in the very first sentence. As a matter of fact, get to the point
in the very first words.
o The reader should get the complete idea in the first two sentences.
o Grab them by the collar from the very first word and never let them go.
o Great tools to grab a reader: surprise, irony, drama, extreme situations,
puns and word play, big revelation.
• In a press release, the headline should be the news peg, the main point. It
should be as compelling as the first sentence.
o The headline should be specific (BAD: "Good Housekeeping Looks at
Crib Sheets" GOOD: "Crib Sheets May Be Dangerous To Children:
Special Investigation in Good Housekeeping's December Issue")
o Your headline can be clever, if the material dictates it. (i.e. "Hillary
Gets No Respect -- Mrs. Clinton Off Good Housekeeping's Most
Admired List").
• E-MAIL PITCHES
o Journalist’s first name is ALWAYS in the subject line followed by a
colon. (i.e. “Joanne:”)
o The subject line must be so compelling and grabbing AND specific that
the person you’re sending it to wants to open it up. A subject line like
“George: Exclusive Story from Blender” is not a grabber. “George: The
JLo Hissy Fit That Nobody Knows About” works. Make believe you
are writing a magazine headline that will make somebody open the
issue to read the story.
TIP: Sometimes it’s a good idea to say sentences out loud. If it does not sound right to
you or something sounds off, there’s probably an excellent chance something is wrong
and can be improved.
YOUR WRITING CHECK LISTS
IF IT’S A PRESS RELEASE…
Barnes & Noble's acquisition of Ingram Book Group, the country's largest book
wholesaler, has sparked a wave of criticism from a prominent industry group and a
Barnes & Noble rival.
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Talk about the cutting edge.
With little fanfare, 17 master knife makers have gathered at Texarkana College's
School of Bladesmithing, all trying to prove they are the sharpest.
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When farmer Van Meek was planting his corn and soybeans last spring, he paid
little heed to Asia's economy, even though Asia is one of the biggest customers for the
crops.
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In a corporate boardroom, chief executives often brim with vision and self
assurance. But when they testify in court, they can be their own worst enemies.
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One of the fastest-selling new products for urban teens comes with a warning
sticker: Users run "the risk of serious bodily harm, including head injury, spinal injury
or death."
Pretty scary stuff for a pair of sneakers.
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Playboy is making a pass at women.
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The pain wars begin today.
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Despite a big push to sign more women up to get M.B.A.s, the nation's major
business schools have little to show for their labors.
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Korean tradition demands homage be paid to the dead -- whether they are human
or lab rats.
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As Kodak and Fuji's market-share war kicks into overdrive, steep film prices are
becoming a sepia-toned memory.
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A comedian named Adam Sandler just dumped a big pail of water on rule No. 1
for the top Hollywood studios: Expensive action movies are the way to make a profit.
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In the latest shot of bad news for the gun industry, United Parcel Service of
America Inc. is tightening its rules for shipping handguns and effectively raising prices
for the service.
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In his first six months as chief executive of Xerox Corp., G. Richard Thomas has
had a run few executives would want to copy.
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The bubble gum has burst.
Baseball and other sports cards are in a slump, as kids reject the classic pastime
for the Internet and Pokemon.
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Once again, the world's giant pharmaceuticals makers have caught the merger
virus.
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Candie's has been a longtime advertiser in Rolling Stone magazine. Now Rolling
Stone is returning the favor.
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A month from now, as Santa Claus crawls back up the last chimney and heads
home, the retail world will begin its annual postmortem: How did discounters once
again manage to trounce traditional department stores?
Was it sophisticated pricing, the latest in-store design, or cutting-edge inventory
management?
Actually, after 20 years of growing discounter dominance, a simpler explanation
rolls into view: the shopping cart.
So far this year, the six leading discount chains, led by Wal-mart Stores Inc., have
chalked up robust sales increases of 5% or more for stores open at least one year. And
each of those chains offers customers the luxury of a shopping cart. meanwhile, the six
leading department-store companies, led by Sears Roebuck & Co., don't provide carts.
Their year-to-date same-store increases have all been less than 5%.
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Sales executive Roger Mitchell wasn't exactly thrilled to find that his wife's
company was holding its quarterly sales dinner at the circus, in a big yellow tent set up
in a parking lot across the street from a McDonald's. "I expect we'll be leaving early,"
Mr. Mitchell said.
But then a clown in a tuxedo rolled out a crimson carpet and ushered the
guests into the reception tent. Mr. Mitchell took in the circus wagons selling Caesar
salads and espresso with hazelnut liqueur. Once in the big top, he sank back in a plush,
red-velvet seat -- and stayed for the entire two-hour-and twenty-minute show.
Upscale audiences are discovering the circus. And troupes nationwide are
catering to their new, well-heeled fans with premium-priced, amenity-laden
performances. Gone are the sawdust, peanut shells and plastic flashlights
many baby boomers remember from their childhoods. They've been replaced by
canapes, cocktails and performances so quiet that a squawk from a toddler draws glares.
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His youngsters will soon have as many Mattel Inc. products as they wish.
Mr. Eckert, the 45-year-old head of Philip Morris Co.'s Kraft Foods unit,
is taking command of the troubled toy maker. Early Wednesday, Mattel
named him chairman and chief executive, effective immediately, ending a
three-month external search.
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Like Ethan Hunt, the fictional secret agent played by Tom Cruise in
"Mission Impossible" and now in its sequel, Mr. Baird is called in to do
jobs too difficult for others to handle -- film-editing jobs, in Mr. Baird's
case. Indeed, if Mr. Baird shows up in the editing room of a movie during
post-production, chances are something is wrong and there is a lot at stake
-- which was precisely the situation when Viacom Inc.'s Paramount
brought him in a couple of months ago to final-edit "M:I-2."
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Get this: A couple of Ivy League wisenheimers put up a Web site on a lark, the
site causes a sensation and the duo become budding new-media moguls with no
revenue but venture capital to burn.
It's the kind of dot-com folk tale that Modern Humorist's Web site would
mercilessly spoof, except that it is, in fact, the brief history of Modern Humorist
itself. Specializing in wickedly funny parodies, Modern Humorist is the
brainchild of two Harvard graduates, Michael Colton and John Aboud, and,
without revenue, has attracted a cult following and $1 million in venture capital.
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Can purple courts, fatter balls and shorter sets save men's tennis?
After two decades of dwindling U.S. television ratings and a steady popularity
fade-out, the potentates who oversee international professional tennis are
making an all-out effort to revamp the game -- everything from painting courts
purple to permitting John McEnroe-style tantrums during play. And they are
quietly experimenting with one of the most significant rule changes in the sport's
history: cutting the number of games in a set to four from the traditional six.
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One morning, a Costco store in Los Angeles began running a little low on
size-one and size-two Huggies. Crisis loomed.
So what did Costco managers do? Nothing. They didn't have to, thanks to
a special arrangement with Kimberly-Clark Corp., the company that
makes the diapers.
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It's beginning to look a lot like a handheld computing Christmas.
Handspring Inc. is firing the first shot in what is likely to become the most competitive
-- and most critical -- selling season yet for makers of devices like Palms, Visors and
Pocket PCs. Over the next few weeks, Handspring, Visor's maker, will roll out its first
national ad campaign in advance of the Christmas selling season. The company will
plaster ads outdoors on billboards, taxi tops and bus shelters. In October, it plans to add
full-page ads in newspapers and magazines. The multimillion-dollar campaign's tagline:
"Visor is."
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Avon is about to call on some new customers, and nary a ding-dong is going to be
heard.
After months of negotiations with retailers, Avon Products Inc., the door-to-door seller
of cosmetics, has chosen Sears, Roebuck & Co. and J.C. Penney Co. to sell its makeup
and creams. Avon has never sold its product in U.S. stores in its 115 years in business,
but, facing a country where women aren't as commonly home during the day and no
longer open their doors to strangers, it is looking to change.
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