MINI WHITEBOARDS:

Make a list of adjectives that you could use to

describe Peter
Make a list of adjectives that you could use to
describe Tomas
DOOR

Jakea Hardeep

WINDOW
Rhys Mark Harpreet

Anreet Manpreet Liam Gemma

Michela Amman Ikrah Josie

Simarjeet Usmaan Kauser Zack

Shona Moiz Luke Akra

WINDOW
Hollie Sonia J’Nade Lauren
Connor Jagjit Calum Adam
Ms
Chamberlain
WHITEBOARD
 Sentence Summary
• Share with your partner your list of
adjectives.
• Do you have similar or different
adjectives?
•
• Working together write one sentence
that sums up what Peter is like and
one sentence that sums up what
Tomas is like.
My Swordhand is Singing
Peter & Tomas
Objective:
*To be able to use PEE to
comment on character (Reading
AF2)
 Chapters 7-10
• As we read Chapters 7-10 add to
your list of adjectives any
observations you make about the
characters of Peter and Tomas.
AF2: I am able to understand
and pick out the appropriate
quote, event or idea from a
text and use PEE to
demonstrate my
understanding
Level 4 Level 5 Level 6

I can: I can: I can:

identify some  clearly identify clearly identify
relevant points the most relevant relevant points,
 support my points in a text, including summary
comments using some including those and synthesis of
generally relevant selected from information from
textual reference different places different sources
or quotation  generally support or different places
my comments by in the same text
giving relevant incorporate apt
textual reference textual reference
or and quotation in my
quotation commentary to
support my main
ideas or argument
 PEE Paragraphs
POINT –
 Introduce the POINT that you
are making.


EVIDENCE – Select an appropriate



QUOTE from the text that will

prove your POINT to be
accurate.


EXPLAIN –
 EXPLAIN to the reader HOW
your QUOTE proves your POINT
is accurate.
 PEE Paragraphs
P – Point Peter is a peace keeper, he tries
hard to keep the peace between
himself and Tomas.
E – Evidence ‘Peter stood, shaking a little,

trying to stay calm and be friendly, as

he always did at these moments’
E – Explanation Peter tries to avoid
confrontation with his father. The text
suggests that Peter is aware that he
must always stay calm and friendly
to avoid the situation escalating;
although it is not always easy for him
to do so. The use of the verb ‘trying’
highlights the fact that it is a conscious
effort.
 Peter & Tomas
• Write one PEE paragraph explaining
your thoughts / opinion of Peter
• Write one PEE paragraph explaining
your thoughts / opinion of Tomas
•
• You could use the summary
sentences you wrote at the
beginning of the lesson as your
POINT
1.
 Can you PEE?
• Swap books with the person you are
sitting next to.
• Read the two PEE paragraphs they have
written.
• Using three different colours highlight
the three different parts to the
paragraph


 POINT EVIDENCE EXPLAIN



• What level would you give your

partners responses?