By :

Kristiyanti Riya Saputri

XI IPA 3
(18)

The Traditional Herbal Clinic

Treatment for healing and health outcomes back is a
dream of all the patients , they do many things including
traditional treatment to the clinic.Now , the traditional
clinical practice in many areas of the city . Its spread was
also more easily with the help of mass media . Many people
who arrive at the clinic , because they want recovery. But,
turns after going to the clinic , among them many are
deceived with false promises such treatment .
In essence , a lot of people who feel themselves cheated
and misled by a variety of traditional medicine .
In the investigation report the latest edition of Tempo
magazine , February 4, 2013 . Promising herbal medicine ,
traditional clinics illegally precisely infuse patients with
chemical drugs , even the use of toxic chemotherapeutic
agents . Steroids are powerful morphine 200 times , even
used traditional clinics to provide miraculous healing effect
on patients . In fact, traditional medicine clinics using illegal
drugs are dangerous

Thesis
Argument
1
Doctors often concerned with cancer patients who prefer an
alternative treatment path that is not logical . The people who open the
alternative medicine clinic mostly had no medical background . " In fact , even
though he has a doctorate , but did not have a medical background , so he can
not be trusted in treating cancer , " said Dr. . Soehartati Gondhowiardjo
complained of alternative medicine practices that deceive the public . So,
people who treat it in a traditional clinic is not a doctor or not people who have
a strong educational background.
In addition, misleading advertising of the treatment also includes
violating the Broadcasting Act. Broadcasting Code of Conduct and Regulation of
the Minister of Health No. 1787 of 2010 on Advertising and Publications Health
Services, stated that the public health service users should be given the protection
of information in the form of advertisement and publication of misleading health
services. All health care ads promising such things mentioned above are not
allowed.

Argument
2
Argument
3
In terms of patients , they have a lot of money to
buy potions from the clinic . Indeed , 1 to 3 days of their
situation greatly improved , but later on they have even
more severe illness and eventually died . So they feel
very misled and harmed sangay with the traditional
treatment .
For those reasons, could be better we go to
someone more expert in dealing with the disease , the
doctor . And more worship and pray for our healing ,
because only God who can heal us . So it would be
much better to avoid traditional treatment in
which only gives false promises alone .


Argument
4
Recommen -
dation

Framework Text

Thesis :
Topic sentence : The option to go to a traditional clinic
Supporting sentence : Spreading of traditional herb clinicpractice.
Supporting sentence : The impact of medicinize in traditional herb
clinic.
Concluding : Traditional herb clinic cheat and mislead
Argument 1 :
Topic sentence : Investigation of Tempo magazine
Supporting sentence : Use of illegal drugs.
Concluding : The use of toxic substances that can harm
patients
Argument 2 :
Topic sentence : The opinion of the doctor
Supporting sentence : Falsehood physician
Concluding : The handle in traditional herbal clinic instead
of people who have a strong educational
background


Argument 3 :
Topic sentence : In terms of laws
Supporting sentence : Violated article
Concluding : Misleading advertising that treatment has
violated laws advertising

Argument 4 :
Topic sentence : In terms of patients who have been harmed
and misled
Supporting sentence : Reaction of the treatment
Concluding : Patients feel harmed

Recomendation :
Topic sentence : Recommendation for treatment to people
who are already experts, that is doctors
Supporting sentence : Only god who heals us
Concluding : Advice to avoid treatment in the traditional
herbal clinics

Kristiyanti R.S