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Purpose
Math
2.1.1 Analyzes a situation to
define a problem.
3.1.1 Analyzes information
presented in familiar
situations.
3.2.2 Applies the skills of
drawing conclusions and
supports the conclusions with
evidence.
Bibliography
www.k12.wa.us/curriculuminstruct/writing/annotations/4gradAnnotations.aspx
Elaboration Units
Table of Contents
DEFINING ELABORATION
Definition of Elaboration
Elaboration means to tell the reader more
about an idea using
Specific words
Readers Questions
Did this writer answer the readers
questions?
I have nice friends. They make me
laugh and they teach me things at
recess. My friends are Jay, Emily, Ann,
and Andy. They taught me how to do
tricks on the bars.
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Readers Questions
Did this writer answer the readers
questions?
When I learned how to roller skate, I was only
five years old. My mom taught me how to
roller skate, but she kept on falling down.
Soon I was the best roller skater in my family.
And when I went on a field trip in second
grade to Roller Valley, almost everyone was
falling down.
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Readers Questions
I like it when it rains.
Lets finish writing this paragraph
together by thinking about what the
reader would ask and answering the
readers questions.
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Readers Questions
I like when it snows.
You are now going to get a chance to
finish writing this paragraph with a
partner. Think about what the reader
would ask and then answer the
readers questions.
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Layering Elaboration
A thoughtful writer layers one sentence after
another.
Each new sentence adds to or develops the
thought like rings around a bulls-eye.
Layering Elaboration
Each idea is carefully
stacked on the next
like bricks in a wall
or rings on a tall tree.
Layering Elaboration
Every sentence and detail fits with the
rest of the topic like a set of nesting dolls.
Listing
My bracelet is special to me. The
bracelet means a lot to me because it
gives me good memories of my friend.
And because it is very special to me.
Its special in another way. It gives me
good luck. Thats why my bracelet is
special to me.
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Layering
My bracelet is the object that means the most to
me. It means a lot because my bracelet brings
me good luck. It brought me luck on the first day I
went to my new school. When I entered my
classroom I saw a girl with a bracelet just like
mine. Her name was Talli. Now we are best
friends and we wear our bracelets wherever we
go. When I wear it, I think of all of fun times Talli
and I have had and it reminds me that I have a
great friend.
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Layering
Layering
Coming Soon ~
2007 Summer Institutes
Elaboration Module
Prewriting Module
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