5 pargraph Essays

5 pargraph Essays
Introduct
ory

General Background
Statement of view(s)
Statement

Specific BG
Thesis

From the (psychological) point of view, .

Body
Paragrap

Medically speaking, .
From the/ a social perspective,

Conclusio
n

Re-statement of the thesis

opinion
Recommendation

Personal

4-parg Essays
Introduct
ory

General Background
Statement of view(s)
Statement

Specific BG
Thesis

Body
Paragrap

On the one hand,

On the other hand,

Conclusio
n

Re-statement of the thesis

opinion
Recommendation

Personal

Introductory Parg
Sent1: General
Background

The use of animals for pharmaceutical purposes

has become quite common in current medical
practices.
Sent2: Specific
Introductory
Paragraph

Background

In particular, medical experts have been using

rats, monkeys, pigs, and rabbit to mention a
few.

Sent3: Statement of
opinion

In my opinion, I think that these devastated

animals have good reason to live that is why
they should not be used for this purpose.

Sent4: Thesis of the essay

The reasons of my view are psychological, social

and
ethical.

Sample Essay: High Score Band 8-9

Introductory Parg:
In today's modern world, computers are
an essential part of everyday life. Around the
globe, children often use computers from a
very young age. Although it is important for
children to participate in various well-balanced
activities, in my opinion, children who use the
computer daily are actually developing a
critical skill for future success. The bases for my
views are personal, academic, and professional.

Sample Essay: High Score Band 8-9

Introductory Parg:
In today's modern world, computers are
an essential part of everyday life. Around the
globe, children often use computers from a
very young age. Although it is important for
children to participate in various well-balanced
activities, in my opinion, children who use the
computer daily are actually developing a
critical skill for future success. The bases for my
views are personal, academic, and professional.

Body Parg1:
From a personal point of view,
computers are an invaluable resource to
help young people explore the world
around them. For example, children who
use Internet to satisfy their curiosity
about diverse topics are already
becoming independent learners. No
child with a computer is ever bored! By
starting early in their lives, children
feel totally at ease around computers;
they are also able to take advantage of

Body Parg2:

From an academic viewpoint, children

have no choice but to master this
technological invention. For instance,
when I was in university, students
brought their laptops to class to take
notes, do research and exchange
information. They wrote assignments,
created presentations and developed
databases. Children who build early
confidence and experience in these
abilities are at a distinct advantage over
those who have not.

Body Parg3:
From a professional perspective,
the computer has found a permanent
place in the workplace. Today,
employers still pay to provide
computer training to their employees.
Tomorrow, corporations will expect
prospective job applicants to already
possess these critical job skills.
Consequently, parents who encourage
their child to use the computer for a
reasonable period of time daily are in fact

Conclusion Parg:
In conclusion, there is no
doubt that the computer as a
technological tool is here to
stay. The sooner children
become computer-literate,
the better for many aspects
of their future lives.

Introduction Parg:

Traditionally, the television

has been an essential part of our
culture. Around the globe,
however, TV programs have
diversified materials. Some
people believe that we should
supervise what we see on these
devices and some refute this.
These points of view will be
discussed in this order.

Body Parg1:

On the one hand, it is

believed by some that people
should observe TV contents; an
idea that supports this is that
the traditional fact that TVs can
show sexual and abusive
programs which are not suitable
for children in particular. It can
be argued that this fact will
remain true in the future. Thus,

Body Parg2:
On the other hand, many
argue that the public has a free
will to decide which program
they can watch and they claim
that by saying television
displays knowledge and
educational needs. Accordingly,
these programs can be expected
to affect positively in the

Conclusion parg:
In conclusion, for the reasons I
have mentioned above, the
. of television materials
censorship is supported and refuted
by many, however, after analyzing
these two points of view, it is clear
that the public view in the whole
world is changed. Consequently, the
argument that people should not
control what they see on TV can not
be maintained and is expected to

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:
Some people think women should be
allowed to join the army, the navy and the
air
force
just
like
men.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer.
Write at least 250 words.