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Write the essay in not less than 350 words. The world today is turning more to
Write the essay in not less than 350 words. The world today is turning more to

Write the essay in not

less than 350 words.

Write the essay in not less than 350 words. The world today is turning more to
Write the essay in not less than 350 words. The world today is turning more to

The world

today

is

turning

more

to

electronic

communications such as the e-mail, facebook and Short Message system (SMS). What is your opinion of this

growing trend? Discuss. You should write at least 350 words.

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What is your stand? The world today is turning more to electronic communications such as the
What is your stand? The world today is turning more to electronic communications such as the

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What is your stand? The world today is turning more to electronic communications such as the
What is your stand? The world today is turning more to electronic communications such as the

The world

today

is

turning

more

to

electronic

communications such as the e-mail, facebook and Short

Message system (SMS). What is your opinion of this

growing trend? Discuss. You should write at least 350

words.

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today
is
turning
more
to
electronic
communications such as the e-mail, facebook and Short
POINTS /
Message system (SMS). What is your opinion of this
IDEAS
growing trend? Discuss. You should write at least 350
words.
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Negative
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impact
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lacks face to
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Thesis statement The world today is turning more to electronic communications such as the e-mail, facebook
The world today is turning more to electronic communications such as the e-mail, facebook and Short
The world
today
is
turning
more
to
electronic
communications such as the e-mail, facebook and Short
Message system (SMS). What is your opinion of this
growing trend? Discuss. You should write at least 350
POSITIVE
words.
People are turning more to electronic
communications as they saves time, are cost
effective and convenient to
Positive
impact
Thesis statement The world today is turning more to electronic communications such as the e-mail, facebook

use

Negative

impact

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lacks face to
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face
face
communication
communication
NEGATIVE
Cost Cost effective effective
Increase of
Increase of
The use of electronic communications will
cyber crimes
cyber crimes
cause less face to face communication, cyber
crimes to increase and a lazier generation.
People are
People are
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becoming
becoming
lazier
lazier
ESSAY OUTLINE 1. Introduction: Stand: Thesis statement: 2. Content: (3 main ideas / topic sentences) Topic
ESSAY OUTLINE
ESSAY OUTLINE
ESSAY OUTLINE

ESSAY

OUTLINE

ESSAY OUTLINE
ESSAY OUTLINE
ESSAY OUTLINE 1. Introduction: Stand: Thesis statement: 2. Content: (3 main ideas / topic sentences) Topic

1. Introduction:

Stand:

Thesis statement:

2. Content: (3 main ideas / topic sentences)

Topic sentence a. supporting detail 1 i. examples / illustrations b. supporting detail 2 i. examples / illustrations * conclusion / sums up

3.Conclusion

Summarise all the points. / Offer solutions to the problems discussed.

Relate a dramatic anecdote. A few common methods used to write the introduction Expose a commonly
Relate a dramatic anecdote.
A few common
methods used
to write the
introduction
Expose a commonly held belief.
Present surprising facts and statistics.
Use a fitting quotation.
Ask a provocative question.
Tell a vivid personal story.
Define a key term.
Present an interesting observation.
Create a unique scenario.
How to write introduction? By Definition The world today is turning more to electronic communications such
How to write introduction? By Definition The world today is turning more to electronic communications such

How to write introduction?

How to write introduction? By Definition The world today is turning more to electronic communications such

By Definition

How to write introduction? By Definition The world today is turning more to electronic communications such
How to write introduction? By Definition The world today is turning more to electronic communications such

The

world

today

is

turning more to electronic

communications such as the e-mail, facebook and Short

Message system (SMS). What is your opinion of this

growing trend? Discuss. You should write at least 350

words.

Electronic

Electronic

communication

communication

is is

a a

form form

of of

communication communication that that is is used used for for the the transfer transfer of of

data, data,

images, images,

and and

signals, signals,

through through

wire, wire,

electromagnetic electromagnetic

energy, energy,

radio, radio,

photoelectronic photoelectronic or or photo-optical photo-optical system. system. Now, Now,

people people

are are

turning turning

more more

to to

electronic electronic

communications communications such such as as the the e-mail, e-mail, facebook facebook

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How to write introduction? By Definition The world today is turning more to electronic communications such
How to write introduction? By Definition The world today is turning more to electronic communications such

and and Short Short

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growing

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popularity

of

of

electronic

electronic

Development of paragraph Basic organisation of ideas: Topic sentence a. supporting detail 1 i. examples /
Development
of paragraph
Basic organisation of ideas:
Topic sentence
a. supporting detail 1
i. examples / illustrations
b. supporting detail 2
i. examples / illustrations
* conclusion / sums up
2 types of paragraph writing:
 Explanation paragraph
 Compare and contrast
paragraph
Effective topic sentence
Effective
topic
sentence

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Has a clear main idea

Has an opinion

Has an opinion

Is related to the thesis statement

Is related to the thesis statement

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Topic

sentence

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lives lives.

Explanation
Explanation

paragraph

Explanation paragraph 1. Electronic communications has made our lives more easy as they enable us to

1. Electronic communications has made our lives

more easy as they enable us to communicate

with others instantly.

  • A. Mobile communication technology and

portable

Explanation paragraph 1. Electronic communications has made our lives more easy as they enable us to
  • touch with friends

laptops enable people to stay in

and co-workers at all times.

i. whatsapps, telegram, e-mail

B. This lets us work and go online in public

locations,

such as trains and in cafes, and has

enabled people

to avoid traveling long distances to

work from

home.

C. It also helps us foster a closer relationship

with

our friends and family.

ii. For example, someone who is staying far

family and friends

apart from his or her

1. Electronic communications enable us to Compare and contrast paragraph communicate with others instantly compared to

1. Electronic communications enable us to

Compare and

1. Electronic communications enable us to Compare and contrast paragraph communicate with others instantly compared to

contrast

paragraph

1. Electronic communications enable us to Compare and contrast paragraph communicate with others instantly compared to
1. Electronic communications enable us to Compare and contrast paragraph communicate with others instantly compared to
1. Electronic communications enable us to Compare and contrast paragraph communicate with others instantly compared to

communicate with

others instantly compared to the traditional

method of

communicating.

Mobile communication technology and

today
today

portable

laptops enable people to stay in touch

and co-workers at all times.

with friends

i. whatsapps, telegram, e-mail

B. This lets us work and go online in public

locations,

such as trains and in cafes, and has

enabled people

past
past

to avoid travelling long distances to

home.

work from

C.

In contrast, the traditional method such as

sending

letters by mail is no longer popular due

to it being

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