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Can you teach Farhad to write a paragraph?
Is the story expressed complete? How?
Writing a Paragraph Work of Art
Planning a paragraph
Unit 1 - H95804 - Lesson 12
Self Development for the world of work
Certificate in Employability Skills
March 26, 2016
Is a paragraph the same?
How, then, should a paragraph be
constructed?
Can you guide Farhad on how to
construct or compose a paragraph?
How can a paragraph
be constructed?
Construct
Sentences
Edit
Complete idea
Lets think in pairs with our LPs
Together with your learning partner,
think and write down keywords for
making a cup of tea.
Can you connect these ideas in the
form of a diagram?
Make a diagram with your keywords.
Compare your diagram with the
diagram on the next slide.
Key ideas connected
Diagram for making tea:
Arranging the paragraph
Now, how can these ideas be made
into sentences?
Now, in the next slide, lets look at the
work of a student who was trying to
construct sentences.
Do you remember the who, what, why,
when and where of making
sentences?
Can you improve the paragraph?
Work with your learning partner and improve the writing
Construct
Combining
Edit
Show not tell
Four teams to share their work:
Read your paragraph again.
Is it clear? Does it make sense?
Does your writing express what you
wanted to say in a better way?
FOUR teams to come up to the front
to share their writeups.
Raise your hands...
Home work
Reflecton the work you did for the past 12
lessons. Write a paragraph on What I
learned in Unit 1 and how I can continue
improving.
Show your LP your work.
Your LP should say whether the writing
makes sense. Improve your writing after
comments from your LP.
Upload your reflection in your e-portfolio.