Professional Documents
Culture Documents
GROUP 8
RADITYA RIKENANDA
RAVIAN NOVALDI
The first material :
o Arguments
Arguments give the readers opportunity to understand
the writers supporting statements toward the topic. In
short, this parts contain the writers supporting
statements and their elaborations.
o Conclusion
It also restates the writers main topic stated in the
previous thesis. This part is extremely important for it is
aimed at emphasizing the writers opinion toward the
issue.
The Purpose of Analytical Exposition
1. To persuade by presenting
arguments
Argument 1:
Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions happen in
many places. The daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio have reported corruptions
are done everywhere, almost in all departments or public services of this country. Corruptions
happen in health, education departments and banks. When we manage to get some
documents in public service offices, we usually need much money to pay. Manipulations
happen everywhere.
Argument 2:
The citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the situations in
which people have opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to break the rules because
they are not disciplined. For example, in the street when they drive a car or ride motorcycle,
they do not have the driving license or necessary documents. Then, they are caught by the
local policemen. To avoid more difficulties, they like to bribe the officer. The officer let them go
then. In other words, the citizens and officers are the same, doing corruption together. If only
the people were critical, disciplined, and obey the rules, and willing to report any wrong
behaviors, this country will not be number one corrupting country in the world.
Example of analytical
conclusion:
Conclusion Based on the reasons, we can conclude that corruption is becoming a bad culture in
Indonesia if it is not ended soon by all of us. It seems that there must be more severe penalty
for the Corruptors. Do we still care about the future of this country?
The Meaning of Hortatory exposition
Thesis
o
Statement or announcement of issue concern
oArguments
Reasons for concern that will lead to
recommendation
o Recommendation
Statement of what should or should not happen or
be done based on the given arguments
The Purpose of Hortatory Exposition
CORRUPTION
Thesis
Do you know what the meaning of corruption is? What is the relation
between money and corruption? Well, corruption is common everywhere in
the world, even in the United States. Its just a matter of intensity.
However, it is quite shocking when one reliable survey claims Jakarta as
the most corrupt place in Indonesia.
Argument 1
The survey has made me sad, actually, because I stay and earn a living
here in the capital. As most people know, Tanjung Priok port smuggling is
not a new thing at all. Entrepreneurs who want to minimize their tax
payments tend to do such a thing more often. They even bribe the officials.
Argument 2
Well, I think the measures taken so far to overcome the problem by
punishing the corruptors is still not far enough. We have to prevent the
younger generations from getting a bad mentality caused by corruption.
Recommendation
I believe we should start at the earliest stages in school and I think
everyone should be involved in the effort to eradicate corruption. We must
not make any distinction
THANK YOU
1. what is the example of The use of
emotive words ?
2. What is the example of The use of
words that qualify ?
3. What is the purpose of the hortatory
exposition?