ART

CRITICISM
SM2273
CHARLOTTE FROST
LAST WEEK
Over the last couple of weeks we learned how to research artists
and artworks in order to put their work in a broader perspective.
This type of art historical research helps us to think about aspects
of the artwork that we cannot see just by looking at the artwork.
Again this could be understood as the difference between internal
and external evidence researching the context of an artwork
contributes to the external evidence we can gather and analyse.
And can help us think about what else is significant about the
artwork.
INTERPRETATION
In 1970 a professor of art at Georgia University, Edmund
Feldman, came up with a 4 step technique for looking at art which
is used again and again to teach art criticism.
It looks like this:
1. DESCRIPTION: What can be seen in the artwork?
2. ANALYSIS: What relationships exist with what is seen?
3. INTERPRETATION: What is the content or meaning, based on
steps 1 and 2?
4. JUDGEMENT: What is your evaluation of the work, based on
steps1, 2, 3?
Interpretation is how we uncover we what think an artwork might
mean.
It is really important to recognise that there are no definitive
answers to this question.
Even if we uncover some of the artists intentions through
researching the background of the artwork, artworks always exist
to provoke thought and reflection and as a result, can mean a
range of things to a range of people in a range of different places.

Confused?
First of all we described the artwork and in doing that, we already began
analysing and interpreting it. Remember that analysis is means just digging a
little deeper than a basic description. It is where we start to openly question
why something might have been made the way it has.

Just like analysis, as soon as you talk about an artwork you begin to interpret
it in your own way. You are filtering it through your own magic lens.
Remember when we tried to describe artworks to blindfolded partners? As
soon as you chose the ways you would describe it you were starting to
interpret the artwork through your magic lens your own way of seeing it.
You might have described the colours or shapes in a manner that is totally
specific to you.

Art critic Jerry Saltz describes art criticism as seeing out loud. This is an
excellent way of putting it because each stage in our set of 4 + 1 steps
(description, analysis, contextualisation, interpretation and judgement) can be
done just by saying what you see and how you see it.
Art criticism is
simply stating
WHAT you see and
HOW you see it.
Lets remind ourselves of how we might do that
DESCRIPTION
= Everything you see before you, without having to do any
analysis or research (internal evidence):

What does it look like?

What shapes can you see?
What colours are used?
What textures are present?
What is the subject?
What is it made of?
MORE DESCRIPTION
= Other pieces of information you can gather specifically
relating to the physical presence of the artwork (external
evidence):

What is it called?
Who is it by?
Where is it/how is it installed in the space?
How was it made?
ANALYSIS
= Everything you see before you, without having to do any
analysis or research:

Why might it look like that?

Why those shapes?
Why those colours?
Why those textures?

Why might that be the subject?

Why might it be made of that?

Think of how you might describe this artwork,
the possible subject matter, the colours and
shapes

Now notice what happens when you start to ask

why Picasso painted this subject, in these
colours, with these shapes

You start to consider whether the style of the

painting conveys an idea, theme or emotion

For example look at that pale patch we thought

might be something like a transparent
handkerchief -- what does being able to see
through it tell us? Is Picasso showing us
different dimensions of pain, or giving us better
insight into his subjects sorrow?

Guess what, those questions I just asked, thats

analysis!
MORE ANALYSIS
= Other pieces of information you can gather specifically
relating to the physical presence of the artwork:

Why is it called that?

Why is it installed in the gallery like this?
Why was it made like this?
Artwork details:

Artist: Pablo Picasso (18811973)

Title: Weeping Woman

(Femme en pleurs)

Date: 1937

Medium Oil paint on canvas

Dimensions:
image: 608 x 500 mm
frame: 847 x 739 x 86 mm

Collection: Tate, UK
THIS IS NOT
ANALYSIS!!!
Researching what other people have said about an artwork
provides you with contextual information, that you can use to
help you form ideas. Learning that the painting is of someone
Picasso was intimately involved with might change the way
you see the artwork. It is fine to state that, but analysis is not
saying what other people have said, it is a method you use to
think harder about the artwork you are looking at.
Analysis happens like this, you ask yourself:

Why might Picasso, a Spanish artist, paint a weeping woman in 1937?

Maybe because in 1937 civil war broke out in Spain.

Are there any reasons he might have chosen to depict war with the
image of a woman crying?

Maybe because during war, women often watch their husbands

and sons go off and fight.

Maybe because in Catholic countries like Spain, the image

of the crying Virgin Mary is a common religious icon.
OK so you might not know about the Spanish Civil War or
Catholic religious symbols. You might come up with other
ideas when you ask:

Why might Picasso have painted a weeping woman?

INTERPRETATION
Interpretation happens when
you gather all your evidence
(through description, analysis,
background research) and you
ask:
What on earth might all these
things mean?
Ways of thinking about interpetation

You are a translator. Think of the artwork as something written in visual

language and you have to translate it into words. What do you think the artist
might have been trying to say?

You are a detective. Think of the artwork as a body of evidence - a crime

scene even. What has happened, how has it happened and why?

You are an archaeologist. Think of the artwork as layer upon layer of physical
information about human life. Dig through the layers and examine them
carefully - what do they tell us?

You are a scientist. Think of the artwork as an experiment, look at all the
materials that have been used and develop a hypothesis on what the artist
might have been trying to prove.
ARTISTS INTENTION
WARNING!!!
Art critics from the past, such as Diderot and Ruskin believed that when they wrote about an
artwork, it was their job to uncover what the artist meant when he/she made it. They saw the
artists intention as a fixed idea and the artwork as evidence of that fixed idea.

These days we recognise that artists seldom have one fixed idea when they create an artwork.
And very often they are not making a single statement or answering a question, but opening up
a conversation by presenting a set of ideas in a new way.

It is up to you whether you think the artists intention is present in the artwork or even if it is as
important as your own views about the work - after all, if it is in a gallery or a public place they
made it so that it would provoke YOUR ideas! You might decided the artwork says one thing
and later discover that the artist was inspired by something else. But if you didnt recognise
that inspiration in the work, was the work any good? Again, its up to you to decide. There are
no fixed answers.
The ways people interpret artworks (the magic lenses they use)
might correspond to theories or ideas they have about culture and
politics. To put this another way, rather than simply saying what they
see, some art critics focus on particular types of evidence to support
the ideas they have or the political agenda they want to push.

For example, someone who believes in psychoanalysis will look for

information that shows the artists psychological condition.

Or a feminist art critic will examine an artwork for information about

gender inequality.

But even within these schools of thought there is no consensus on

how to read an artwork and each interpreter will approach it in their
own way.
TASK
Writing an art critique as a group.

Part A:
Split class into two. Each half sit in a circle around an allocated
artwork. You will each be given ten sticky notes. I will reveal a set
of questions one by one and youll have up to 5 minutes to answer
the question on the sticky note. Make sure you number each
question from 1-10!
QUESTIONS
1. What shape is it?
1. What shape is it?
2. What are its visible features?
1. What shape is it?
2. What are its visible features?
3. What might it be made of?
1. What shape is it?
2. What are its visible features?
3. What might it be made of?
4. What could it be?
1. What shape is it?
2. What are its visible features?
3. What might it be made of?
4. What could it be?
5. How might it have been made?
1. What shape is it?
2. What are its visible features?
3. What might it be made of?
4. What could it be?
5. How might it have been made?
6. Why might it look like this?
1. What shape is it?
2. What are its visible features?
3. What might it be made of?
4. What could it be?
5. How might it have been made?
6. Why might it look like this?
7. What does all this make you think about?
1. What shape is it?
2. What are its visible features?
3. What might it be made of?
4. What could it be?
5. How might it have been made?
6. Why might it look like this?
7. What does all this make you think about?
8. Do any other themes or ideas spring to mind?
1. What shape is it?
2. What are its visible features?
3. What might it be made of?
4. What could it be?
5. How might it have been made?
6. Why might it look like this?
7. What does all this make you think about?
8. Do any other themes or ideas spring to mind?
9. What might you name this artwork based on all these
ideas?
1. What shape is it?
2. What are its visible features?
3. What might it be made of?
4. What could it be?
5. How might it have been made?
6. Why might it look like this?
7. What does all this make you think about?
8. Do any other themes or ideas spring to mind?
9. What might you name this artwork based on all these ideas?
10. Have you enjoyed thinking about it?
Writing an art critique as a group.

Part B:
Each group will be allocated a wall to stick all the notes to. Stick
them vertically from 1-10 and each person add their own notes
(horizontally) to the relevant sections. You will now have a wall
covered in art criticism.
Writing an art critique as a group.

Part C:
Vote for your favourite answers to the 10 questions by sticking the
smaller blue/green notes to the ones you like best.
Description:
What shape is it?
What are its visible features?
What might it be made of?
What could it be?

Analysis:
How might it have been made?
Why might it look like this?

Interpretation:
What does all this make you think about?
Do any other themes or ideas spring to mind?
What might you name this artwork based on all these ideas?

Judgement:
Have you enjoyed thinking about it?
HOMEWORK
For home work youre going to produce your first work of art
criticism and youre going to be assessed on it. This project
counts for 20% of your final mark.
Youre going to do it on Twitter (and then Storify) and youre not
going to care too much about spelling or grammar, youre just
going to focus on describing, analysing, interpreting and judging
an art show (of your own choosing).
TASK
Set up a Twitter account
Set up a Storify account
Choose an art gallery to visit next Monday at 4.30.

Option 1.
At a time of your choosing, go to an art gallery and live tweet your
response to the art on show. Hashtag every tweet #arttwitticism.
Remember to describe, analyse, interpret and judge the work on show.

Option 2.
At a time of your choosing, go to one of the protest sites and live tweet
your response to the art on show. Hashtag every tweet #arttwitticism.
Remember to describe, analyse, interpret and judge the work on show.
For a reminder:
Description: say what you can see
Analysis: ask yourself questions about what you see and forumlate some
logical answers
Interpretation: share the ideas youre starting to have about the work
Judgement: decide if you think its any good or not

Warning!
Context is not important here. This assessment is about YOUR ideas.
Whatever art is on show, you do not need to tweet anything about who the
artist was. Just focus on seeing out loud! Im looking for YOUR reaction to the
art - whatever reaction that might be, good or bad or indifferent. You could
think of it like a computer game, the more you move around the space and
say interesting things, the more points youll score. In other words, the more
original your statements about the artwork, the better your grade will be.
When you have said everything you can possibly say about the
art on show you can stop. Before next weeks class gather your
tweets together in a Storify. Include a link to the show you visited
and where possible, an image of at least one artwork on show.
Send the link to clfrost@cityu.edu.hk by 9.00am on Monday 27th
October.
HOW TO STORIFY
YOUR TWEETS
You can search for your tweets on Storify by your Twitter handle and
the hashtag (#arttwitticism). You can either select all your tweets in
chronological order, or if you prefer to edit what you said, gather the
best ones and put them in a logical order. Think of the Storify as an
essay you wrote live and in the moment, there will be mistakes and
you wont be judged on those, Im just looking for whether youve
described, analysed, interpreted and judged the art work IN YOUR
OWN WAY!

Heres a good example of a Storify I did from a discussion on Twitter

I will be watching you online all week via the hashtag. I will know
who is where and what you are looking at and I will share the best
tweets with art critics around the world. They, like me, will want to
hear you say things in your own way and well all be hoping you
say new, interesting and unexpected things about the art youre
looking at not repeating the same types of things that are
always said. And remember that Hong Kongs artists arent well
known in the rest of the world, so its up to you to tell the world
about what they make.
Heres a list of galleries to choose from
Here is a list of places you can read art reviews

REMEMBER TO CHECK GALLERY OPENING DAYS/TIMES

AND DONT PICK SOMEWHERE THAT WILL BE CLOSED
WHEN YOU WANT TO VISIT!!!
REMEMBER TO USE THE HASHTAG #arttwitticism OR YOUR
TWEETS (NO MATTER HOW GREAT) WONT COUNT!!!