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The cars were all I looked out of the

moving slowly and window. I saw a
I was fed up of man picking his
waiting. My back nose while his
was aching and I wife looked on in
just wanted to be disgust. Radio 1
far away was jangling in the
background

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The cars were all

moving slowly and I
was fed up of waiting.
My back was aching
and I just wanted to
be far away
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I looked out of the

window. I saw a man
picking his nose while
his wife looked on in
disgust. Radio 1 was
jangling in the
background
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There was a swathe

of colour around It started with a
the stadium. Lots roar. I could feel
of loud voices could the vibrations in my
be heard and there stomach. This was
was a hush of it. The smell of
expectation as the beer and hot dogs
players emerged. fuelled my hunger
for the match
 Use of the senses..

There was a swathe

of colour around the
stadium. Lots of
loud voices could be
heard and there was
a hush of
expectation as the
players emerged.
 Use of the senses..

It started with a
roar. I could feel the
vibrations in my
stomach. This was
it. The smell of beer
and hot dogs fuelled
my hunger for the
match
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A group of students
were looking at the All the people were
video games and wondering about
laughing. The like zombies. On
security guard every face you
looked as if hed could see the marks
rather be of boredom as they
somewhere else. walked down the
The Bahamas mall
perhaps
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A group of students
were looking at the
video games and
laughing. The
security guard
looked as if hed
rather be
somewhere else.
The Bahamas
perhaps
 Use of zoom-in detail

All the people were

wondering about
like zombies. On
every face you could
see the marks of
boredom as they
walked down the
mall
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Everyone was Noise bled through

smiling like the amplifiers. I
Cheshire cats. This could feel the thud
was heaven. of drums like an
Rooster were about extra heart-beat.
to take the stage. The day had been
The noise of the ripped open by the
amplifiers growled hellish marriage of
like lions about to string and vocals.
take their prey This was heaven!
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Everyone was
smiling like Cheshire
cats. This was
heaven. Rooster
were about to take
the stage. The noise
of the amplifiers
growled like lions
about to take their
prey
 Use of figures of speech

Noise bled through

the amplifiers. I
could feel the thud
of drums like an
extra heart-beat.
The day had been
ripped open by the
hellish marriage of
string and vocals.
This was heaven!