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Concise: The struggle for liberty has gone on for a long time.
2. Be concrete.
To express actions and conditions, use specific verbs,
adverbs, or adjectives rather than abstract nouns.
2. Be concrete.
To express actions and conditions, use specific verbs,
adverbs, or adjectives rather than abstract nouns.
“Ellen” “walked”
3. Match subjects and agents.
When it is appropriate, make the subject of your verb the
agent of the action the verb describes.
VERB: A word that describes an action or condition.
SUBJECT: The word or phrase in the sentence that names who
or what is doing/being what the verb describes.
When she was a child, Jennifer believed in the tooth fairy.
3. Match subjects and agents.
When it is appropriate, make the subject of your verb the
agent of the action the verb describes.
VERB: A word that describes an action or condition.
SUBJECT: The word or phrase in the sentence that names who
or what is doing/being what the verb describes.
When she was a child, Jennifer believed in the tooth fairy.
I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind,
thoughtful. People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior.
You have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings
whatsoever when we're apart. I can be forever happy--will you let me be
yours?
Jane
Dear Sam:
I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind,
thoughtful. People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior.
You have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings
whatsoever when we're apart. I can be forever happy--will you let me be
yours?
Jane
Dear Sam:
I want a man who knows what love is. All about you are generous, kind,
thoughtful people, who are not like you. Admit to being useless and
inferior. You have ruined me. For other men, I yearn. For you, I have no
feelings whatsoever. When we're apart, I can be forever happy. Will you let
me be?
Yours,
Jane