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INTRODUCTION
• Misinterprets evidence.
• Fails to present ideas in a coherent, clear and technically correct
manner.
• Maintains or defends views based on self-interest or
preconceptions, regardless of the evidence
What to write?
• An essay comprises both content (what is said) and form (the way
in which it is said.
• Introduction
This is the first paragraph of your essay. This is where the writer
introduces his topic for the very first time.
A narrative hook occurs at the start of a essay and is meant to “hook” the
reader so that he or she keeps turning pages.
• The best hooks are just the first sentence of the book—something so gripping
that the reader must keep going.
• Some hooks, however, last for the first paragraph or even the first page or two.
• Literary Quotes.
• “ not all the glitters are gold”
• Quotes from famous people
• “never look down upon people”
• Pose a question.
• Have it ever come across your mind what happened to Bhutto if she was not
murdered?
• Set a scene
• Changing schools was one of the hardest decision I had to start my new life
• Use an interesting fact!
• African people are considered to be individuals who are born to
be slave.
• Your thesis statement will have two parts. The first part states the
topic, and the second part states the point of the essay.
• For instance, if you were writing about and his impact on the
United States, an appropriate thesis statement would be,
• America has impacted the future of our country being super power
• Another example of a thesis statement is this one for the “Winning
Characteristics”:
“During my high school career, I have exhibited several of the
“Winning Characteristics,” including Communication Skills,
Leadership Skills and Organization Skills, through my involvement in
Student Government.
Body: it meant to support your thesis
statement.
• This is the main crux of your essays, It is a part between the
introduction and the conclusion.
• So the most vital and important content of the essay will be here.
• This need not be confined to one paragraph. It can extend to two or
more paragraphs according to the content.
• Usually, we have a lot of information to provide in the body.
• The mistakes writers generally make is to go about it in a haphazard
manner which leaves the reader confused.
• So it is important to organize your thoughts and content. Write the
information in a systematic flow so that the reader can comprehend
Conclusion
• In a narrative essay, the writer should show, not tell, through the
use of colorful words and sensory details.
• The best descriptive essays appeal to the reader’s emotions, with
a result that is highly involved.
• One of the most important qualities of a good narrative is sensory
description that brings the settings, people and events alive for
the reader.
Consider these two simple examples:
I grew tired after dinner.
As I leaned back and rested my head against the top of the chair, my
eyelids began to feel heavy, and the edges of the empty plate in front
of me blurred with the white tablecloth.
For example
• It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.
• I was born twice: first, as a baby girl, on a remarkably smog less day in
January of 1960; and then again, as a teenage boy, in an emergency
room in August of 1974.
Your strongest points should be the first and last paragraphs within
the body, with the others falling in the middle. Also, make sure
that your paragraph order makes sense. If your essay is describing
a process, such as how to make a great chocolate cake, make sure
that your paragraphs fall in the correct order.