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Email etiquette
We interact more and more with the
written word all the time
With the world getting closer people are
going physically away from each other.
immediate feedback are important.
Email Becomes Ineffective
Make it personal.
Answer swiftly.
No subject line
Poor Usage
For example,
Place the paper in drawer A.
Click the green “start” button.
Another example,
I have a couple of questions:
How can we improve customer satisfaction?
Will the proposal empower employees?
General Tips
Write in a positive tone
“When you complete the report.” instead of “If you complete
the report.”
Avoid negative words that begin with “un, non, ex” or that
end with “less” (useless, non-existent, ex-employee,
undecided).
Use smiles, winks ;), and other graphical symbols
only when appropriate.
Use contractions to add a friendly tone. (don’t, won’t,
can’t).
When you are sending an attachment tell your
respondent what the name of the file is, what program
it is saved in.
Subject: need 3 mobile phone models by Tues
Hi Kris,
I need three mobile phone models for Thursday's demo in Chennai. They
need to be all touch screen and black and silver, and they need to
be packed by Tuesday night.
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Subject: Re: need 3 Mobile Phone models by Tues
Hey Jyoti - I've got two Mobile Phone Models – touch screen – black and
silver - already packed from last week's demo, but I don't have
another one right now. Can you cope with two touch screen and one of
other type?
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Subject: URGENT: need 3 Mobile Phone models
Hello all,
I've *got* to have another mobile phone model for the Boston demo, and
I need it by tomorrow afternoon. Jyoti has only two, and I've got to
have three. if anyone have one in their desk somewhere, I'd really
appreciate it!
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Subject: FYI: donuts in break room
Hello all,
The donut fairy left a dozen doughnuts in the downstairs break room. First come,
first served!
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Subject: information
Hi Kris,
Hi Kris,
Are there any Web pages about the history of the U of I?
By the way, did you get the three mobile phone models you needed last week?
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YES
Thank You
For Listening!!