Professional Documents
Culture Documents
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Subject Line SUBJECT: BLOCK LETTER STYLE
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Complimentary Sincerely,
Close 3 blank lines
Parts of a Business Letter
(continued)
Dear Sir,
Sub: Delay in Delivery of Raw Material
Enclosure Notation
This line tells the reader to look in
the envelope for more. Type the
singular for only one enclosure,
plural for more. If you don't
enclose anything, skip it.
Common styles are below.
• Enclosure.
• Enclosures: 3.
• Enclosures (3).
Carbon Copy
Sirs
I would like to……………..................................................
………………………………………..
Yours Truly
Marketing Manager
Block Form
Unindented Paragraphs.
Date and Complimentary Close
Are on the Right Side.
Reference Is on Left Side in Line
With the Date.
Inside address, Subject and
Enclosure Are on Left Side of the
Margin.
Sample – Full Block Form
April 2, 2008
Sirs
I would like to……………..................................................
………………………………………..
Truly yours
SEMI BLOCK FORM
April 2, 2008
ABC Holset Limited
28, Navratan Complex
Indore 452 006
Sirs,
I would like to……………...............................
………………………………………..
Yours Truly,
Marketing Manager
TEHREEM ALI
Organizational
Patterns
Direct: Good News / Neutral
Main Ideas
Secondary Details
Positive Ending
Indirect: Bad News
Neutral Opening
Positive Explanation
The Refusal
Positive Ending
Direct approach
Examples
Letters that grant credit/requests
Congratulatory messages
Letters that acknowledge receipt of goods
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Directs plan
Best for:
•Good news
•Non-emotional issues
•Audiences that prefer a straightforward
approach
Direct approach: Opening
4
GIVETHE POSITIVE OR NEUTRAL
INFORMATION.
BE OPTIMISTIC.
PROVIDE COHERENCE.
USE THE EMPHASIS TECHNIQUE.
STRESS RECIEVER INTERESTS AND
BENFITS.
Direct approach: Opening
Examples of opening:
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Direct approach: Middle
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SALMAN ARSHAD
Sales appeal
• THE SALES APPEAL IS THE PORTION
OF MESSAGE IN WHICH THE WRITER
ATTEMPTS TO PERSUADE THE READ
TO TAKE A SPECIFIC ACTION.
• Personalize the message
• Suggest alternatives if appropriate
• Aim for quick action
Example of Sales Appeal.
• “Mr,Philips please accept a three month free
subscription to professionals in business, and
give us a opportunity to show you that the
magazine will reach you in timely manner.
If you are satisfied at the end of the three-
month trial period may subscribe to
perceptional in business for three year at
half price_$79.25”.
Direct approach: Closing
•Express appreciation
•Be concise
•End with positive, friendly
statement to build goodwill
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Direct approach
Supporting details
Middle
or facts
Friendly/
Close positive
statement
Incomplete
No Name or Information
Contact
Weak Close
Information
A GOOD E-MAIL Subject Line
Contains
SUBJECT: CONFIRMATION NO.PZ07T28. Relevant
DATE: TUE,07 APRIL 200- 17:04:19-0600 Data
FROM: ZAARS59.ORG@YAHOO.COM.
TO: ZAARS59@YAHOO.COM.
Direct
Opening WHEN MAY I EXPECT 4 DOZEN MINT CRISP COOKIES I ORDERED ON
MARCH 25?
KHALID CHANDIO.
1234, DIFFENCE 007. Complete
RAHIM YAR KHAN.
Close is
Contact Courteous
Information