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SAMPLE 1 2 PARTS OF A SENTENCE SUBJECT Suzie Dogs A snake VERB cried bark hisses
OBJECT (Noun) Who/what a girl the show. his grandparents. English teachers.
SUBJECT (Noun) Who/What I Teck Hooi Juana Encik Amin and Puan Rokiah SUBJECT (Noun) Who/What My mother He I They is is are am
ADJECTIVE (how)
VERB (action words) every day. yesterday. last night. just now.
TIME (When)
dreamt cried
WH - TECHNIQUE 6 When 1 Who What Which Aini Yesterday Aini 2 Action Words (Verbs) went or went to Gurun. 3 Who What Which 4 How 5 Where 6 When
to Gurun
yesterday.
VERB
NOUN
CONJUNCTIONS
GENRE OF NARRATIVE The pictures below describe an incident. Use all the words given to make sentences about the pictures.
TIME Yesterday,
SUBJECT Linda She Linda She Linda It The wallet Linda She Linda The policeman He The policeman
VERB
ADJECTIVES/OBJECT/PLACE
TIME/WHEN yesterday.
along the street. street a wallet beside the drain. the wallet.
money, documents and identity card. honest. an honest girl. the wallet to the police. Linda. her for her honesty. Linda for her honesty.
Question 22 The pictures below describe what happened to Puan Sarina last Sunday.
Draft 1
Adjective/object/place /how aclerk clerk. in post office. a post office. to workfoot foot on on foot goes
time
time
police police the thief topolice station. to the thestation. station. the man.
Draft 2
Puan Sarina Puan Sarina She Puan Sarina She Every morning, Puan Sarina Last Sunday, A motorist A man The man He The man He Puan Sarina
is works goes Puan Sarina was walking Puan Sarina came to snatch saw grabbed took thanked
aclerk clerk. in post office. a post office. to work on foot foot goes home from work was walking every morning. to work on foot. last Sunday. home from work.
Puanher handbag. Sarinas handbag. the incident. the thief. the thief to the police station. the man. him.
Draft 3
Puan Sarina Puan Sarina She Puan Sarina She Every morning,
aclerk clerk. in post office. a post office. to work on foot foot goes every morning. to work on foot.
Puan Sarina lives in my neighbourhood. She is a clerk in the post office not far from her house. She usually goes to work on foot every morning. Puan Sarina who lives in my neighbourhood is a clerk in the post office not far from her house. She usually goes to work on foot every morning.
Draft 3
Last Sunday, she was walking home from work. Suddenly, a motorist came to snatch her handbag. She screamed for help. Last Sunday, as she was walking home from work a motorist came to snatch her handbag. She screamed for help.
Draft 3
the incident. the thief. the thief to the police station. the man. him.
A man was passing by. He saw the incident. He quickly grabbed the thief. He decided to take him to the nearest police station. Puan Sarina thanked the man and praised him for his quick action. A man who was passing by saw the incident. He quickly grabbed the thief and decided to take him to the nearest police station. Puan Sarina thanked the man and praised him for his bravery and quick action.
DRAFT 3 Puan Sarina lives in my neighbourhood. She is a clerk in the post office not far from her house. She usually goes to work on foot every morning. Last Sunday, she was walking home from work. Suddenly, a motorist came to snatch her handbag. She screamed for help. A man was passing by. He saw the incident. He quickly grabbed the thief. He decided to take him to the nearest police station. Puan Sarina thanked the man and praised him for his quick action.
DRAFT 4 Puan Sarina who lives in my neighbourhood is a clerk in the post office not far from her house. She usually goes to work on foot every morning. Last Sunday, as she was walking home from work a motorist came to snatch her handbag. She screamed for help. A man who was passing by saw the incident. He quickly grabbed the thief and decided to take him to the nearest police station. Puan Sarina thanked the man and praised him for his bravery and quick action.
Sekolah Kebangsaan Taman Nuri organised a Caring for the Environment Campaign in Kampung Keranji. The Boys Scouts SUBJECT The Boys Scouts There Two groups groups The first groups group They VERB gathered were cleared cleared gathered ADJ./OBJECT/PLACE at the Community Hall Community Hall two groups. the drains. groups drains the drains. drains empty cans plastic bags into plastic bags . cans into and bottles TIME early in the morning.
ADJ./OBJECT/PLACE the compound. compound trees and plants. the village. village.
TIME
SUBJECT they
ADJ./OBJECT/PLACE lunch. them for their service. for their service. proud of them. proud
DRAFT 1 Sekolah Kebangsaan Taman Nuri organised a Caring for the Environment Campaign in Kampung Keranji. The Boys Scouts The Boys Scouts Two groups groups They The other group The other group They They At 12 noon 12 noon gathered cleared gathered cleaned planted wanted to beautify beautify they had thanked was at the Community Hall Community Hall the drains. drains empty cans plastic bags into plastic bags . cans into and bottles the compound. compound trees and flower plants. the village. village. lunch. them for their service. for their service. proud of them. proud early in the morning.
DRAFT 1
Sekolah Kebangsaan Taman Nuri organised a Caring for the Environment Campaign in Kampung Keranji. The Boys Scouts gathered at the Taman Nuri Community Hall early in the morning. Two groups cleared the drains. They gathered empty cans and bottles into plastic bags. The other group cleaned the compound. They planted trees and flower plants. They wanted to beautify the village. At 12 noon they had lunch. The village headman thanked them for their service. The headmaster was very proud of them.
DRAFT 2
Sekolah Kebangsaan Taman Nuri organised a Caring for the Environment Campaign in Kampung Keranji. The Boys Scouts gathered at the Taman Nuri Community Hall early in the morning. They were divided into two groups. The first group cleared the drains. They gathered empty cans and bottles into plastic bags. The other group cleaned the compound. They planted trees and flower plants to beautify the village. At 12 noon they had lunch together. The village headman thanked them for their good service. The headmaster was also very proud of them.
DRAFT 3
Sekolah Kebangsaan Taman Nuri organised a Caring for the Environment Campaign in Kampung Keranji. The Boys Scouts gathered at the Taman Nuri Community Hall early in the morning. They were divided into two groups. The first group cleared the drains. They gathered the empty dirty cans and bottles into big black plastic bags. The other group cleaned the compound. They also planted trees and beautiful colourful flower plants to beautify the village. At 12 noon they finished their job and had lunch together. The village headman thanked and praised them for their good service. The headmaster was also very proud of them. They were very happy to see the village finally clean and beautiful. They went home tired but satisfied.
We ask he to show we the way. Mawar Flat is near ours school. He went with her parents. She went to Taiping with his. I and my family love local fruits. Salimah honest girl. The lady in pain. You must helpful to the girls. The dancers very beautiful.
He have an idea. The prizes is good. He are going to Alor Setar. I were cycling to school. Her parents loves her. At there we saw many animals. You have a chance to visit to Sabah. She thanked to Ahmad for his help. He jumped in to the river.
MODAL WORDS
He can comes with you to my house. At first I cannot saw the lions. My father did not went with me. She does not plays netball every afternoon. Betty will writes the letter.
Use root words after
do, does, did
DOUBLE VERBS
The lady was fell into the river. We are must clean the drain every day. Later he was crashed into the ditch. There have many ways to become clever. I very like to listen to music. There very many many people at concert.
They go picnic last week with teacher they. Muthu was not go to school because he did not feeling well.
SOME COMMON ERRORS IN WRITING 1. Mr. Lim took family picnic waterfalls Mr. Lim took his family go for a picnicthethe waterfalls. for a picnic at at waterfalls. 2. - farmer feeds hens ducks - grains with grains. The farmer feeds the hens and ducks eat grains. 3. - children gift mother birthday The children gift theirgift motherpresent on her birthday. gave a mother a a gift onon her birthday. their to their mother her birthday. 4. There - accident front school morning was an accident in front of the school this morning. There had an accident in front of the school this morning. 5. Mr. Samy wife Penang holidays Mr Samy and his wife went to Penang for the holidays. Mr Samy and his wife went to Penang for holidays. 6. Yesterday rained people caught rain It rained heavily yesterday. Many people was caught in the rain. Yesterday was rained heavily. Many people caught inin the rain. it rained heavily. Many people was caught the rain.